You gotta admit, that is a pretty lame excuse to hate a character! OR.... It's supposed to be a cover up for the REAL reason you hate Barret! D: *suspicious stare*
Well... At least you don't go for the sole reason he has a gun for an arm >__>;;
You asked for it! SoOoOoOo~ Here we go! K a i r i makes a nice summary of what I needed to say, but I'll just emphasize on certain points: The necks are *really* too long. I'm not exactly sure of it's proportion size, but it shouldn't be any larger than half the face itself (you may wanna verify this). And as far as the hands go, it's roughly the size of one's full face. (yours here are too small!) The perspective doesn't work all too well either, but I appcrieated the landscape drawing anyway because; 1) I hate perspective! D: 2) it gives it an amusing, flat style, in the sense of being able to see everything in the drawing in detail from up front. I dunno if that came out right but yeah XD So, to sum it up!: Work more on body proportions and your perspective. You can do this by doing a lot and I mean a bloody f-cking lot of observational drawing. It's not always the most exciting thing - hell it can be even BORING - but it helps improve your way of perceiving things, and it's structure. :3 Good luck~!
OMG PINK!!!!! *___*!!!! It automatically owns!! AARGH. So GLORIOUSLY pink ~~~ gaaaah it's so pretty <3 Those brushes give a way wicked effect. Can I stick this up on my sig when I get bored of my current one?
Haha, I accomplished absolutely NOTHING in HTML class today because I was so busy reading your story, chapters 9, 10 and 11 XD I guess that's to some extent my fault, but I'm putting the blame entirely on you because your work is SO f-cking good. How the bloody hell do you write like that...? Wtf! Those battle scenes were truly amazing it blew me away. The more I read this, the more I'm totally curious to know where you're going about with Kairi ~ I hope the next chapter will focus more on her mysterious case! :3 To wrap this up, in chap 10, I wanted to thank ya for giving Zack an appearance! *__* (*fav FF character*) it was a total shock that totally took me by surprise - I never saw that one coming XD *sigh of happiness* Awesome going man! Keep up the great work! <3 PS - Serve the dumbasses please? ...T__T
ROCK ON FIRENANAKI!! Which reminds me, Nanaki is also an underrated character. ;__; Great, neither do I XD
O__O Omg she actually said that?!? That woman is such a b*tch to everyone except Cloud. ARGHBLAHWANNASLAPHER. I never knew what happened in that scene since I just barged in the front entrance like a barbarian XD I love it that way! T_T And yet Vincent has a f*cking claw with buttugly shoes!
Nope, not yet there... But I guess it's close? In a metaphor-ish kinda way >_>;;;;
DDD:! BOOOO HIIIIISS! *throws tomatoes* Cid's cool too, I like them both. B-but...why duntcha like Barret? T_T
This guy gets next to no love. Why do so many people hate him?! I personally thought he was a character that provided some sort of optimistic humor in the crew. Yeah so he's not always so bright but isn't that what makes him charming? >_> Plus, I felt so bad for his past. C'mon, let me see a raise of hands ;__;
I can honestly say I prefer your previous works, but this one works fairly well. >.o Not liking the line at the top which kinda 'breaks' the siggy...
No lol! You can keep guessing but you'd never get it, nya ha ha! It's gonna be so...'exciting'. In every meaning XD
I have a feeling this is somehow directed to what I previously said....>_>
Hey shut up! >.< Well...yes, there would be cake I guess. I'll make sure of that-- *pause* I just had the GREATEST idea for a cake...
I say Lucks-ord too, but for Demyx I go Dee-mix. English is a weird language.
I speak english and french, not japanese. <__< Translation?
Hey, I don't know if you've ever heard of it, but you should REALLY try the 'Private Message' technique! It's direct, private, and it reduces the spam! D: DUUUH. >:/
Haha, well there aint much going on at the moment so...yeah >>
Yeah, *Oblivion* states a good point. But then again Zexion's theory is pretty neat.
That's not bad at all! There's some lovely shading there, nice work. I wasn't sure if you wanted critics or not so I kept my mouth shut. o.o;