XD With a bit of luck and Sprite, I should have it up tonight. ...RHYME! ...Yeah so, I was saying. I'm sure this one will please the members more. It puts the imagination at advantage more than the tech skillz, so there's a chance for anyone to win! =P
We already have a Universal Language: it's MONEY! I mean.. English. :D I heard this some time ago on the news, but more and more schools in different non-anglo countries are making 'Learning English' a compulsory subject. It's what people use to communicate with nowadays, and it's important that everyone should know a bit of it. Also take the example of Modern Graphic Design that's meant to communicate information visually. Most of the text used in this case, be it in ANY country, is in - a lot of the time - english, or have some sort of english phrase in it.
LOOK ZANDYNE LOOK LOOK I GOT THE CRITS UP! =D =D =D See? I'm not a lazy bum. X3 ~Kairi's Review~ Rikurep : http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l1...orgnewYUS2.png - Overall presentation : The whole pic looks a little 'screwed' so it makes the first impression look a little weird. (In my eyes.) And the details could've been spend more time on. But I like some of the characters personal 'touches' which makes up for some of the sloppy details =P. - Accuracy & proportions : Most of the faces lack good propotions, some eyes too. Some of the small details are very accurate, something that makes you look a tiny bit Ambidextrous. The hair style is very similar on almost everyone that is not a good thing. But I like the way you made each one of them a little special. Almost all the cloacks are very good, porpotional and with the way they fold around the character. - 'Style' and creativity : Hmh, this is a little half/half. The organization is a stolen idea, but you made some of the characters look more like your own which is a good twist. To be honest I hate the way you numered them because 1. In some numbers you can't see what number. 2. They are numbered wrong =P. I like the small personal 'touches' you did on some of them, like the one guy you gave glasses. Zandyne : http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q...pics/RIGHT.jpg - Overall presentation : The first impression of it is really neat and sweet. I have some things that I state out below. 2.5/3 - Accuracy & Proportions : Almost the whole pic looks very well propotioned, though I would like to point out some places: the leg you see all of ( the right one) looks slightly thick and a little chubby. It doesn't fit with the other one. I would like to see her arms more marked out and a little more visible since I don't think it looks natural, the way all of them just stick out at the end of the heartless teddy. I think the forearms should've been more visible. I also love the face, it's very well porpotioned. The expression and eyes fit with it. Some hair parts are really good but some look a little flat. 4/5 - 'Style' & creativity : I like this idea because it is very creative and sweet, you have also made the heartless teddy very 'squishy' that makes it adorable XD. It could have had some more details. 5/7 Good job both ~~ ~Stupid Aquarius' Review~ Rikurep : http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l1...orgnewYUS2.png - Overall presentation : I personally think it's messy. You should've cleaned-up the scan! Maybe even work on the 'placement' of the drawing, I can sort of feel it wasn't really handled-out here. I wonder if you even bothered to clean it up. Though unlike Kairi, I believe there's enough detail in the lineart itself, which gives a pretty good impact, albeit the messy smudges all around it. I really appreciate the general lineart nontheless. - Accuracy and proportions : Since this is an opposite hand drawing, I can already congratulate ya for the attempt at it. Though there are a couple of proportion errors around the eyes in most of the characters, along with some of their faces being a bit too big/being deformed. But like I said, really nice attempt for a left-hand drawing. I really appreciated the effort put into this work~ - 'Style' and creativity : If you ask me, this somewhat resembles to the KHII:FM+ wallpaper...you know, with Sora & co and the Org members lining up. That's my impression anyway. But it doesn't particuarly look blatantly copied either, and there's some sort of interpretation going on. Zandyne : http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q...pics/RIGHT.jpg - Overall presentation : It's neat, clean, perfect. Almost, anyway. There are some faint smudgy areas here and there, it's not something that hits the eye immediately. I'm also loving the sketchy feeling to this, it looks finished. For general presentaion I don't see why I shouldn't give you lower than a 3/3. - Accuracy and proportions : Here as well, even when done with your opposite hand, the proportions work. I'd have to point at the arms that are tucked under the plushie (like Kairi already mentioned), make it more visible. The way the teddy is sitting on her lap (the bottom half) doesn't look all that natural either...or is it supposed to be floating? It's either one of the two, make it look it's floating or make it look more like it's resting on her lap. Otherwise, great going. - 'Style' and creativity : I think it's so cute - HEARTLESS TEDDY! =D I envy that girl lol. On a more serious note, it would've been more original/creative if you designed the teddy itself. OKAY THERE GUYS! Lol, I hope I don't slack off for the next competition the way I (horribly) did so for this one. ~_~
There we go! Now be a good rodent and make the corrections. :D!
Hey there new fella! (: Welcome and stuff. Have fun around here and while you're at me, be sure to play by the rules! Toodles~~
But! That's where the Power of Prayer comes in. :3 You'll be good. *pats*
Oh RIGHT lol. Yeah, I'm way slow.
Uuh....hello, image's not working!
Oooh I have an idea to help you sleep! Someone should knock you unconcious with a baseball bat. There!
Eeewww.....:S I hate it when snakes do that. I remember it always used to give me the goosebumps *wiggles*
You're pretty good Rikurep. You've definately got something going on there, don't ever abandon drawing! You didn't request it, so I'll ask first: d'ya want a crit for this or not?
Zeeeek how come you can't use it? (Maybe the file size is too big?) This made me chuckle hehe xP A bloody damn shame you can't use it.
At first I thought Rufus was the Sushi person. <.< *throws garlics at Mari*
Stardust, you have my respect. I congratulate you for being the sole person on this thread (who supports Sora/Kairi) to bring out a concrete argument, without lashing on the Soku/totally disproving. So good for you. (:
Last Train - David Guetta
^Damn right <3 Nervous - DJ Fresh feat Mary Byker
^AAAAH MICHAEL JACKSON! <3 Baby - Brandy
Romeo - Basement Jaxx
Elfyyyyyyyy Zandyne wasn't talking about Kairi's feelings, she was talking about the lack of character development she had. Aw lol I did. Hmm...there was a word for this. I think it was 'friendship sent on fire'? Something along those lines. Quoted from moi. =D
A *Snake*?! Aaargh!! Snakes are cool, but I could never bring up the courage to have one in my *house*...>_>
