I liked King Mickey because he had more exprience than the others.And he helped a lot.But I also liked Auron and Beast.Beast and Auron because of their strength.
Kaori jumped onto a rooftop and began jumping from rooftop to rooftop.She stopped on one that had a wall that gave her shade.She took out her gunblade and looked at the broken part of it. "Hm,I wonder if she will find a place to stay.Oh well,she can find me here." Alex turned around and headed the way Kaori came from.
Kaori was with Sora.During the whole time she was watching them fight. "Your Majesty!" she called. The King saw the boys were handling Alaric so he ran over to Kaori and Sora. "Are you guys okay?" he asked them.
The King came running in,fighting against heartless and nobodies. "Sora!" When he got to the group he saw Alaric. "You,you're the one that caused all of this?" he asked.
Well,there's two main characters.The main one is Kentaro Matsumoto.And the second one is Kaori Hitsugaya.There are other characters but I forgot their names lol I've decided to post the story.The title of it is called A New Fate,A Rising Hero.
Well this is a new drawing I did a few weeks ago.She took me a couple of days to draw but I was able to finish her.Not sure how many of you saw my other drawing of a guy named Kentaro Matsumoto.Like I said in that thread,this girl is also from the same story that Kentaro is from.Her name is Kaori Hitsugaya. http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r77/vma_92/HPIM0897.jpg She wasn't meant to look up but I left it like that because I thought it looked better than what I first thought. lol I had a little trouble with her crest necklace but I was able to get it.Its not perfect but better than any other way it first came out. I would appreciate CnC,please.
OOC:Oh sorry.I was doing something else lol "Uh,no thanks." said Kaori. "Oh well ok then.If you need anything you can look for me and I'll help." said Alex as Kaori walked away. "You can just look for me here!I'm always here!"
OOC:I'm actually just waiting until this battle is over.
To tell you the truth I like it without a face.I have no idea why.I really like it.Her hair sort of looks a little too stiff if its blowing in the air.Her arm seems a little too thin.I love her dress.This is good.Keep it up.
This is very good.I like it.But I really don't like what you did with her leg.I love her hair.And like Reptar said,you shouldn't have left her breast hanging out like that.Maybe you just should have put a small curve around that area.But everything else I see is fine.Nicely done.
"No,I don't." said Kaori.She looked at Alex and walked past him. "But I'll eventually find a place." "Hey wait,since you don't have a place to stay,why don't you stay over at my place for a while?What do you say?" asked Alex.
"No.I just woke up in the middle of the forest covered in blood.But the bleeding had already stopped when I woke up and also the wounds I had were already closing." explained Kaori. "Do you have a place to stay?" asked Alex. OOC:Gotta go.I'll continue later.
"Actually I just woke up in the middle of the woods a while ago.So I think you're mistaking me for somebody else." said Kaori. "You don't remember what happened before that?" asked Alex.
OOC:Your welcome.But I think Cupcake is winning. Elena laid down on the bed and waited until Dante would clean up he wound. Hatsumi nodded and headed back to the mansion. "Kaori." she responded. "Hey you know I think I've seen you around before.I think I would see you with a lot of other people.But I could be mistaken." said Alex.
OOC:Oh I think I know what you're thinking haha Hatsumi whipped her eyes and smiled. "Okay." "Are you going to bandage my wound or what?" asked Elena. "Uh,its okay." said Kaori. "By the way,I'm Alex.What's your name?"asked Alex.
I vote for Rising Storm.
All of a sudden the pressure disappeared.Kaori got up from the ground and looked around but didn't see anybody or anything. "Where was that coming from?" As she continued to look around she spotted someone on top of a building. "Hey,I'm sorry!" called the boy.He jumped down from the building and ran over to Kaori. "Hey,I'm sorry.I thought you were one of those strange creatures." OOC:Woo new character! Played By:VaKh87 Name:Alex Age:15 Gender:Male Appearance:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l141/Mrs_wakamiya/Random anime Guys/Newaion00.jpg World They live in:Twilight Town Biography:He hasn’t met Sora and the others.He’s lived in Twilight Town for a while now.His father used to be a blacksmith.And Alex would help his father out. Personality:Kind,clumsy, and can sometimes be self-centered. Weapon:Two katana Other: Has the ability to control gravity but can’t quite control it.
OOC:I'm too lazy and p*ssed off right now.You guys do the fighting scene,I'll come in when its all over.
Probably up to 5 chapters.
I haven't posted it yet.I'm still in chapter two.I want to get a few chapters done then I'll post it.
