This is a first for you so I'll say you have more than enough room to improve. This isn't really a poem so much as a lament. There's no visible structure or rhythm from where I stand, and it's written with a very prose like form. I suggest reading a lot of formal poetry and getting a feel for that before diving into free verse, it's easy to get caught up in the emotionally driven "there is no wrong" type style. That said, the sentiments are there and the idea is workable, but this is definitely lacking in execution. Keep working though, everyone has some potential to do great things.
I often give the impression that I'm gay. I don't know why, maybe it's the girlish mannerisms or the willingness to admit it. However, I'm nearly ninety percent sure I'm over ninety seven percent straight.
Since you're back there's only one thing for you to do. Rip out sexy entrails and wear them on your head while repeating the phrase, "I am the Queen of France."
50% Normal, expected more though. Thank my skewed world view for that, or a faulty quiz.
It's just like biting your thumb or swearing, it really has no meaning in and of itself but nothing does really the interpreted meaning is what counts and people define things as offensive, non-offensive and whatever. Flipping the bird is just a way to communicate an idea and it's generally accepted so it's not stupid, saying that is like saying it's stupid to think that stupid means someone lacking in intelligence just because you don't happen to like it.
I've looked at this many times and lack understanding. Even the cycle of creation/destruction with fire, earth, metal, water, and wood makes more sense than this arrangement. You see, limiting "the elements" to these four leaves out so much of nature. Electricity and wood are the most notable of the left out elements. In and of themselves they cannot fall under the categories set out by the four elements arrangement. Maybe wood could be explained as a earth water hybrid but electricity is movement of electrons and shares no traits with the others. Anyways, if I had to follow this fundamentally broken system I'd call the fifth element "life". Kinda cheesy I know, but it makes sense, those things support life, life itself drives the forces and interacts with them, it makes some sort of sense.
Don't even think about blaspheming then. You should go worship kitty and repent for your sins.
A number 2.
You're a ****in' blasphemer you know that?
kitty could.
Not with that attitude, you can't.
OH, why would I do a silly thing like that? ^.^
Can't you see that you're in love with each other?
Shades and Storm you two are bickering like an old married couple.
Drugs, sex and piracy. I'm on board. If you know what I mean. <3
That's so cute, you think you can keep up with me. ^.^
You've such a dirty mind, what made you think that I'd like that?
No beatings? Deal's off.
If it's on a spit overlooking a grand fire covered in barbecue sauce, then you've got yourself a deal. Cannibalism in underrated. ^_^
Maybe. >_> I still don't wanna. :P
