Overall it's pretty decent. It's obviously just a sketch and isn't really supposed to be great as art or anything. That said, I like the design and the color scheme works how it is or how you said it should be, in my opinion. I do have to say two things are out of place in it, the patched bit, the higher one kinda breaks the flow of the design and should be moved over to the side more. The boots also seem a bit out of place for some reason, can't think of it but there is a reason I'm sure. Okay, I think that's it.
No, I'm lepracing one rettel with anothel.
First of all, I had not the slightest proof to lead me to believe you were not a native English speaker. I understand that you don't always have...
Come on, if I gave two shits from a rats ass about being popular with people I don't know I'd be a sad specimen. Sounds pretty bad.
Thanks. Thanks to you as well. It was intentional, I hate the obsession with unrealistically short skirts the Japanese have. Same goes for the "it's gotta be either busty or loli" mentality that we find so prevalent in popular series. I do agree the legs look funny, I'm still trying to figure out which proportion got messed up but it's something that needs more study.
I know, I know! You're going to ask Ernest Hemingway! Am I right? Am I?
As you can see, I'm boled.
All your neon are belong to me!
I haven't seen you around in like a few days, I thought you'd died a horrible and gruesome death.
Your through fake! Had to say it upon viewing your old name again.
A glaive originally referred to a sword or a long bladed spear, so I'm using the traditional definition here. You're using the newest and in my opinion stupidest definition of the word which refers to a glaive as a throwng edged weapon like a boomerang or shuriken. No offense intended, it's just a personal preference.
Does that make me straight or lesbo then?
I still like the overall story you've got going here. There's nothing I can find that's grammatically wrong, either there are none or I missed a few, both are distinct possibilities. I do find a few of the diction, or word choice, decisions to be a little off, but that's not really a problem of technical nature so I can't say it's any more than an opinion. You do a really nice job with the present tense story telling method, I couldn't do it with out constantly having to check myself, I'm just used to writing in the past tense I suppose, enough about me though. Oh well, I guess I have no more to prattle on about.
Eyes are too big, lacks a third dimension, has incorrectly proportioned body structure, and employs faulty physics in the clothing's construction and layers. Overall it doesn't look very good. Reference pictures are your friends. If you want me to recant or elaborate, just say so.
Agreed. Repliku as always, for some reason beyond my comprehension, has voiced my thoughts on the issue. People are afraid of federalization, it's associated with bad things. At this point we've screwed the pooch six ways to Sunday and this bill is what many consider a necessary evil. Think what you want, what's done is done. We can only hope that this teaches Americans of all levels to learn some restraint.
Oh, not really, just there are no new ones. You've done away with some of the ones mentioned before but the rest I believe is up to how much you practice, but that's just me.
You may not be a native speaker but your spelling and grammar are better than most native speakers'. I question some usage and stylistic decisions you make but there is in my opinion nothing actually wrong with any of the things that bother me. That said I think this needs some work, but it's a lot better off than it could be. So, try to keep your words straight as possible, you know, if something that gives you pause a dictionary is your friend dictionary.com is not. Nothing really egregious, so good work, I suppose.
If you change it to Justice I'll tell you who Justice is.
Pretty decent overall. Could do with a little more structural work on some parts of the clothing, the shark looks a bit iffy, but overall it's a succeeded attempt in most prominent aspects.
Second one was my favorite even though I see many improvements here. I think I've said everything I have to already so I'll stop nattering at you.
