First time I've read an epic poem that didn't make me laugh. Take that as you like.
These people are supposed to be freaks, just some more so than others, as such the bug eyes and thin face are entirely intentional. I can see where things could be done better and more clearly within this scope though. I see. It's not really a personal thing really and it'll likely get scrapped in the end so this is about as far as it's likely to go.
Honestly, I can see why you don't like this and yet I can't really agree with your appraisal, mostly because what I do can hardly be classified as work but to a lesser extent because I like the book dude better. Someone I showed in real life told me the same thing. Almost exactly the same thing.
Yeah, just kinda felt like drawing this out. Most of it is very sketchy and hard to definitely see, but I guess it's fine for a first try.
Essentially the end of the series as well, at least under my metaphorical pen. I don't want to write another fifty four pages at ten font, single spaced, and roughly two-three pages a week, it's really wearing on the mind. I'm glad you enjoyed yourself. Anime opening you say? I don't draw well enough to even consider animation. Meeoooooooooooow! As a final note: I won't lie and say that this was a good story and I most certainly won't be indignant about my paucity of readers since it is my own fault. Still I cling to the hope that this has in some way been an experience for a person beyond myself. And so she said, "Farewell.".
Okay, does this help at all?
I like your premise, but you need to fix your grammar, spelling, and syntax. There are many errors with these three things and I think you need to take a look at the basic rules of the language to get a better idea of what is kosher to do and what is a big no-no.
A while ago.
It's a pretty nice sketch. Given the style used here there isn't anything I'd especially like to comment on except for the crown he's wearing is kinda unevenly drawn. But that's just the OCD talking.
Okay, thanks. All right. Opinion is duly noted and comment is appreciated. I tried editing it a bit, but in the end I came out with something about the same. *Sighs* Back to the drawing board.
Actually, about that...
Holy ****. You're teal now.
True, need to do that, don't wanna, noted earlier but did not change (should do that), inconsistencies of unskilled self teaching(should alter), and shading scares me more than color I need to work half of a step at a time here. I appreciate the criticism more than positive review. It's up to you, I'm going back to edit based on Cin's criticism so I might as well add some finishing to it I guess.
If you have any suggestions I suppose I can do it, I just won't pick the colors myself.
It's not bad, but it seems like the end just trails off as if it never got finished, just as you said. You're grammar is fairly consistent and readable, the story, though not exactly riveting is interesting enough and probably could go on longer if you wanted it to. So yeah, it's a quick painless read overall.
Dream? Care to clarify? Thank you for your input anyways. I didn't ink this one, I tend to suck with anything I can't erase, I used the original sketch and gimp to get a similar effect. Thank you for your input though.
Line art version of a sketch I did for the same friend as the last one. So yeah, this looks a lot better than the original scan in my opinion, but since I'm color deaf or rather tasteless I won't be doing colored things for the time being. Yeah, go to town kiddies.
Not much, just a bit of unwanted work on my part. But with holidays started up I can afford to put off any and all forms of thoughtful work for at...
I leave for a few weeks and this happens?! He's one ****ed up mother****er.
Much appreciated. Probably not. I don't generally do that kinda thing. However the possibility is there since I've been making a few changes to my usual form lately anyways.
