Care to join?
Everyone involved agreed to the ropes.
I'm cybering with a stranger so you'll just have to wait.
Wonders why you want to know.
That huge thing creeped me out.
What is love? Do you love me? Bang bang?
Looks like you've had some training or you've just a knack for this. Not much I can really say other than the obvious add more depth and shadows, especially around the faces. Yeah, that's pretty much all I can think of now.
It's been a while since I've seen something new from you. I'm glad you do not disappoint. The fact that this as a true story makes it all the better since you set the scene very well and drew the reader into your reality. For the time I was reading I almost felt like I was there watching everything myself, no kidding. I don't really have much else to say because that was, in my opinion, the most impressive part of the piece.
This was very philosophical in nature.That said it is kinda depressing, but the good thing is that it only conveyed that because it was written well. My personal opinion is that yor style is pretty solid for this type of piece. You wrote it as if knew what you were doing, as if you had a specific purpose planned for everything involved. That is good, everything should seem intentional when you write, nothing should be a mistake and I don't feel like I saw any.
This "Downtown" thing you speak of, I have heard tell of such places, but I look outside and sit back down knowing that I'm not going outside,...
No. I live somewhere else. At the edge of nowhere to be ever so slightly more specific, I can see somewhere from here, but it's pretty far off.
I have seen this situation. Are you secretly one of my friends without me knowing about it?
Who doesn't? However, the fact remains that not everyone can do that due to only watching movies once or twice and many more do not even want to,...
My movie nerd friends would be ashamed though. They're guys that sing the Inquisition song and recite lines from Life of Brian.
Unfortunately, I had to look it up to remember the title, only watched once.
Mystery Men. Power: You possess infinite knowledge Drawback: It only goes one folder deep
I'm gonna go cut myself now.
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Which site, or are you one of the gameboy users?
