awh, but I like procrastinating! Yeah, life's been alright, bit of stress here and there, but all good :)
http://www.urbandictionary.com/ ^I'll just leave this here...
The amount of wins in that list have burned what was left of my respect for the music tastes of todays society.
Well thanks :) but I think its all good. I understand it all, I just can't concentrate D: Anyway, hows your life?
Yah. Well then you would actually love this. Me on the other hand... -_-
Gold. Ha. I see what you did there :D
Extension History -_- So I have to read a ton of boring books about Appeasement and WWII. Not bad, but still boring :P
ha only on khv can you go from a purple jewel to a new york detective :P I'm great, currently studying one of the worst subjects ever invented,...
Oh I am so in!
While I enjoyed 27 Dresses, these movies just piss me off no end
Blossom, Bubbles and Bu- DAMMIT IENZO YOU BEAT ME TO IT! However in answer to your question-Roxas, Axel and Xion. Because Days was a good game an Xion was a good character *shot* EDIT: S V and U Benson, Stabler, and...well you dont need anyone else do you? :P
Ohai. Hows it going?
Oh piss off...
Wait...its not a sport? First I'm hearing of this!
I agree with what others have said. Nice concept, but it doesnt seem very poetic. Try experimenting with more literary rechniques and imagery to really boost the emotion in this poem. Also, its free verse, but try to link the syllables in the corresponding lines of each paragraph. It helps the poem 'flow' better. With all due respect, No one has flat out said that this is a horrible piece of work and you should quit writing while you're ahead. Everybody here is giving you their thoughts on the poem so that you can improve your writing skill. We dont sit here thinking 'this is terrible. Whats the absolute worst comment in the world that I can give to make sure this kid never writes again?' no. We sit here and read the poem, outline whats good and bad, and what you need to improve on. Its not negative comments, its advice so you can be motivated to improve your work.
My list was better If it aint broke, dont fix
Fixd for you
I wouldn't mind Snow if he wasnt such an ass all the time. As if Hope doesnt have reason to be angsty, really.
^ This the entire time i was playing xiii i wanted hope to kill snow. He just annoyed me so much. Besides, call me odd, but i actually didnt mind hope all that much
Take that back. ^ oh yeah...and the chocobos! *coughbalthierandbascharethehottestthingsinffxiicough* Benson out~
