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Very well put together overall but the left character has an awkward transition from torso to legs because the waist, hips and legs are a little too small to match the upper body it seems. and the torso on the right one looks a bit off, not sure what it is but it looks like it's too much to one side or something. I like this.

How many times have I told you not to talk about me online? *Runs away crying*

I have an irrational fear of ALL living things under 1% of my size. This is the first time I've ever been glad to live in the US.

Pretty ****ing amazing. The greyscale shading looks well done and the overall construction and physics show that you know what you're doing even if it isn't photographically perfect. I love this pretty well.

This is something I never knew was possible. Especially with the way that woman looks.

Wants you to be explicit and say what you mean by nice.

Actual critique: The head is not properly proportioned. Too round, not oblong enough. A head is usually pretty much an ellipse plus a triangular-ish chin and a more rounded top. What you've got is a circle with that. The eyes are huge and add to this effect. The hair also seems a bit thin on the head and borders on looking like the head has had bits shaved off of it's shape. The flowers don't really follow and physics and are just kinda there all shown straight on with no variation in angle as if looking up at you from the surface of water. Overall the pic looks good enough in spite of all I've said against it but when zoomed in it's not quite as likeable and everything I've mentioned shows up. I'm not sure if it's because the picture is meant to be smaller and seen in that format or not. Either way you know that you're good enough at drawing.

I am disappoint in you.

I'm not gonna make a bad joke and ruin the day for you even though I want to, so be joyful and ****.

This thread did not go just as planned.

Okay, I'm not a fan of first person most of the time anyways so I'm not really familiar with this format. That said, please bear with me. Overall, I think this is okay. The prologue doesn't exactly have a concrete meaning yet, which could either be a good or bad thing depending on how you want it interpreted. But that's not too major anyways. There are some grammatical errors along the way like, "if I hadn’t of predicted this". That's not right. "had not of predicted" is just bad grammar and doesn't even fall under colloquialism so I'd change that and things of that nature. Formatting wise I would only change this, ""Hey pixie how’s Darren?†“Hey Pix, how’s your brother holding up?â€", by adding a line break because it looks sloppy together and it's bad style. The story itself is not too developed and you tend to leave describing things a little further along than I'd like them but that's just taste. Technical errors are pretty minimal but I just don't find myself incredibly enthusiastic or interested in this. Maybe it's just the premise of the story but I do think the writing is adequate either way.

Originally joined earlier but I don't like counting the n00b months.

Ghost pirate or ghost pirate zombie?

Well that would account for my unfamiliarity now. Feelin' kinda dumb for missing that little fact though.

You were pretty awesome but I feel like I don't know you anymore.

Kroshanks I think that you were Silver_Bullet at one point. Is that right, or am I thinking of someone else?

You friended me on Face-vids.net. It made me reconsider my suicide so you could say that you saved my life.

I very much liked reading it but I didn't like it as a poem. It felt more like a short stream of consciousness essay story. My preferred poem is very structured and has a musical quality in the form of a rhyming and rhythmic scheme, after all the original poems were sung. Diction was good but not exactly perfect by any means and story telling was also good but could have flowed more smoothly and had a more interlocking feel with the repetition. I'm not sure about the details since I'm not a poetry type anyways but I feel like this is not the result you were aiming for or I am not your intended audience. It's a good start for getting back into it, but you have a ways to go from here I guess.

I'm more of a Lightning Saix fan but Command Wolf is badass and you've done a nice job with it. My favorite thing is the fact that it actually has the illusion of the third dimension that a lot of people aren't good at capturing even in a more rigid structure like this. I'm looking forward to the finished product. The only thing that I would change myself is the feet placement. It seems slightly off, not really worth changing since it could be the angle at which the picture was taken that is causing it.