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Only if we're all in the same room at the same time.

You say that every time this happens. If there's another woman why don't you just leave me?

I concur with the man currently on top of me.

Don't give me that, I invented it's not you it's me.

Why don't you ever come by my house in pitch colored clothing anymore? My door is always unlocked for you.

The American legal system is pretty lenient on rapists.

I applaud you for trying. I should be doing the same but I'm gonna follow my psp buddies and play it with limited japanese knowledge. I expect fun results.

What are you doing at our house? This isn't your house! What are you doing here? What? What? What? What? What?










Hi, we never talked but I remember your handle from the late bronze age. Glad to see you I suppose.

Though I really think that you did a good job with the picture itself technically and artistically I also feel as though the face and hair don't really give the same kinda feel as the original character even though you've got the posture spot on.

****** is an insensitive term. They prefer to be called degenerates.

Cage is the man who wanted to marry Elvis and settled for his daughter.

It's the Ghostbusters song guy!

Finally managed to tumble, trip, and otherwise stagger my way through this. I've got no clue what this is about and I still feel compelled to read. It feels like a free verse poem: incomprehensible prose. The words and phrases mean something by themselves obviously, but without a broader context I feel like it might as well be just random ramblings. I also prefer something this long to tell me a story rather than a mental experience or perception door or whatever else is incredibly trippy, but I'm still reading so I must see something in this somewhere that I like. It would be easier if I could watch this with author commentary telling me what's going on for sure though.

Alright. I see this has many views but no posts, a fact that I shall soon be invalidating. You seem to stumble infrequently, an admirable quality in a writer. There is a negative to that gold star I just handed you so I'll be taking it back and wearing it for the rest of the day. Your diction needs more diversity, you seem to have the vocabulary for it but you don't seem to use it as freely as you could and you also need some dialogue work. There's just not much of it at all here to go on but it's not very snappy or interesting even when I feel it should be the main attention grabber of a section. So there are my thoughts overall. To be more specific I like the feel of the first one and think it needs more to stand on as a complete or at least more complete work. The second is not to my taste as far as subject matter but the description is good to go even if it doesn't seem quite as forcible as it might be. The third one is just not a story in and of itself. Write a story around it and I might like it, design a game around it and I might like it but as is I'm gonna give a no on that front. That's all I have to say, grammar was unobtrusive as it should be and I'd like to see more from you. That's pretty much the long followed by the short of this post.

Or would you rather be a fish?

The worst has just ended. I assure you that this is so because the enemy has completed warming up and has already used his ultimate attack once.