This was alright. Better than your past work, but I'd still not call this exactly the most desirable result. My first and only issue with this is that your syntax becomes, at times, broken and fragmented a little too much towards the start. I'd keep the grammar and structure more on the by-the-book side at the beginning. I understand that it is supposed to be first person narrative but, as it is, the difference between the start and the end isn't enough to fully show the character's progress in thought process in my opinion. This is because I feel that a slower shift from rational to overwhelmed would better suit the passage. This is purely opinion, obviously, and can be disregarded at your discretion. I didn't really like it overall though. It just felt like it was trying too hard to be thought provoking and philosophical. It's impossible to write anything shorter than a full book on solipsism and the like without seeming like a dilettante. But whatever, maybe this isn't to my taste is all.
He left a long time ago. Pretty cool as I recollect.
I think that the doodle reflex that activates around paper and cardboard came into existence while I was still in kindergarten because I used to...
I feel I must question though what exactly you like about my stuff. I just like to know the reason behind things when I can. There should be a...
Why don't they want to apologize to me?
It was a shame how he carried on
Alright. I will remember to do so. I guess you can expect some manner of notification in the near-ish future then.
There was a cat that really was gone
She believed he was a holy healer Who would heal her son
It actually is Bou. I checked the properties of the pic. Bou is a man for those who didn't get this and was the lead guitarist for Jrock band Antique Cafe. Time wasted on this 30 seconds.
Technically yes. But I don't remember the username I picked or the password so that'd count more as a no really.
But he was real great when he had a girl to squeeze
Blue. No, yelloooooooooooooooooo--
Looks like Bou from An Cafe.
But the kasachok he danced really wunderbar
But he also was the kind of teacher Women would desire
I'd argue, but you really have got me there. Situational specificity seems to be the better route to a universally beneficial solution here.
I am thankful, appreciative and kinda feel like using an emote, but at the same time I hate the damn buggers. >/
