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Some fan is actually trying to write Detective Trap based on what they had on it in the story.

I watched the first two Twilight movies.

You funny man. The oceans up north still haven't recovered from Exxon-Valdez. I give 20 years minimum before we see any semblance of recovery. You can't even begin to compare the damage scale of the two disasters.

Fret not, the thing still supports Twatter.

People who weren't expecting this should be dragged from their homes and shot for their stupidity.

Valkyria Chronicles. Only game I've seen as many women on the battlefield as men.

I was actually somewhat glad I lost Lucifer and Satan because I'd become totally dependent on Armageddon and Victory Cry.

Probably the best choices on all accounts.

The median is 215. The cutoff for recorded results is 100. I've gotten down to an average of 263. I'll make it there in no time.

I'll have to pick it up again and see. The thing that annoyed me was the slow pace interspersed with some jokes that were amusing, many that were not and a bunch of useless side stories that basically all end in shota-esque romance pairings for the fans to exploit.

Does that series ever go anywhere? I feel like I gave up too early.

As much as I never leave my comfort zone I encourage other people to do so. So far I've seen you're good with poems and psych(o) shorts so I'd like to see that you're also good at longer, chaptered works. You have my support in whatever you choose to do, except for if you choose to do nothing.

Xaldin? Is that you?

I've only just now managed to finish this and just now noticed that this piece was worlds above all of your past submissions to the forum. I am, to a certain extent, in awe. Such an improvement is spectacular to see really. I don't have much to criticize because of the quality and I don't feel like attacking even the things I can because I liked Teashades so well. Damn. You can color me every shade of impressed you like.

Seeing as you did ask for criticism of some sort I'll make note that I liked this piece mainly because of your diction and sentence structure. The choice of words for once did not sound pedantic, stilted or snobbish in the slightest because it fit the tone and topic so well. This language will not always work for every piece so do not write the same way for everything unless you intend on always writing about the same kind of thing. Your sentence structure is great. I have trouble doing more than stringing together a few clauses but you make it look like you've been reading and writing literature for years. It's hard to explain, but you did well. However, it's another thing that will not translate well into many other subject matters, time periods, tones or styles. So you've got this kind of writing down pat. I suggest that you branch out and try to write more somethign with a more mundane and prosaic style.

I'd only accept cash, check or money order.

Rarely, but not never.

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Knee jerk or visceral?

Reaction or reflex?

Repose or respite?

Square peg or round hole?

You think that's you on that floor?

What do you have 95 of?

Does that seem right to you?

What was that?

Believe it or not George isn't at home, please leave a message at the beep. I must be out or i'd pick up the phone. Where could I be?

It was actually more like a tank with tires, but I'd call it a car of some sort since things with rocket engines that move faster than the speed of sound can be counted as cars too.