No one in they're right mind would play one kind of music for the whole 24 hours. Though, I'm sure some Rammstein and Stahlhammer show up from time to time.
At Worcester Polytechnic Institute they get a permit to break sound codes for one day a year and blast music that you have to leave campus to get away from.
You pretty much didn't bother creating a universe for Freidus to move about in and thereby made atmosphere harder to achieve. Saying it's in Trafalgar ahead of the story does a little something, but it's not part of the story and it doesn't really help. I wouldn't really call this philosophical because it doesn't explore ideas, it presents them and then tells everyone else to think about it without any stimulus or point of reference for their thoughts to work from. Most people wouldn't feel like thinking about something if it is brought up for no reason. You need to work on manipulating the audience to do what you want even if all you want them to do is something vague and nonspecific. I also get the pedantic vibe from everyone who tries to inject more than subtle philosophical elements, but there's nothing wrong with that. Overall, it's not really anything you said it was because it was far from finished in my opinion. It's going in the right direction, but it needs to have more of almost everything to be what it's advertized as. So, it's a case of not enough of the good things. I didn't notice anything actually bad here though, so I'll say you did a decent job.
Wait. What?
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It lost steam in the middle because as a psychological scare goes you want to be scant on details. The things you're afraid of are generally primal. Things like the dark, being alone and the unknown. You compromise the fear of the unknown when you manifest the being as the girl. You manage to get fear of inevitability out of it, but you could have done more. It was worth the time and although your writing isn't as smooth and grammatically correct as it should be I'll admit this wasn't bad at all. So you should put a little more time into editing and making sure you're using words not only correct for definition but part of speech.
Well, that's my plan so I'll talk to you later.
Are you going for an afternoon nap too?
Hey, me too.
That's what the list tells me.
I say hello too.
Very sleepy~
My thoughts precisely.
It really is too bad, because I'd like it a lot if you loved me forever.
Can we, like, trade places?
More lives have been lost in the oil spill even if they are not human lives. And honestly the deaths of Katrina could have mostly been avoided if people weren't stupid enough to build the city under the water. The levees were shoddily built and people were taken advantage of. It would have happened eventually regardless of the hurricane, people try to say it was bad luck, but it was straight up bad planning.
Some colleges hold these and the townies come out to gawk at the college students. It shows you who to watch out for the most at least.
The tourist industry is all a lot of places have. It's all fine and well to say you don't like it, but it's the livelihood of many people and they'll likely lose their homes and possibly lives without it. Not every area has businesses to make its local economy go so don't be so insensitive about stuff like that. The damage done by Hurricane Katrina is effectively over. Only the people dumb enough to want to live below sea level again are having troubles. Another note worthy detail. The Gulf of Mexico and Atlantic Ocean are bigger than the area effected by the hurricane. A lot bigger by area and a ****ing lot bigger by volume. Not to mention the fact that chemical dispersants are causing it to rain oil inland further increasing the range of the damage. I'd say I was definitely right in putting them in totally different leauges.
Go find it yourself. No one help him.
I was about to be like, "It's the SHREDDER!"
