The complacency. It hurts.
That's the saddest thing I've heard all day.
So this is just because you guys are being too complacent about something? What has happened to the premiums of this site?
Okay, most people couldn't it all pull it off at all. But I do believe if the greatest team of this century or any other tried, they could do it. I generally speak as if that ideal team were working on it with all my what if scenarios.
If you don't need anime... Read Hoshi no Samidare. Fucking now. If that doesn't make you at least well up...
This shit is why Tista, Hoshi no Samidare and Fapmaster Kurosawa should be anime.
Thanks for the input everyone I'll start trying to put some background in soon, but right now my hand is kinda in too much pain to do another update at the moment Spoiler: Jube On Time
You know that you want tiny Carapacians to command forth into battle for the glorious Reckoning. None shall escape the Red Miles.
J-just, do it okay! I'm not like doing this for you guys or anything! IT'S JUST PARTIROTISM! I DON'T LIKE ANY OF YOU!
Oh my dear sweet ever loving Jesus fucking his brother Christ on a carousel! They're going to ban me! LOOK AT THAT CLEAR THREAT! LOOK AT IT! I WILL NOT BE KEPT DOWN! I SHALL RESIST! FOR MY COUNTRY I WILL DIE IN THIS SHIP!
Really? I thought they had a thing for teal.
how much longer is premium going to be pink?
I'm not going to ask how.
Spoiler I always thought bunny ears fit him. 0u0
It just goes to show how fickle and stupid some folks are.
*****! IS THAT USA-CHAN MAN! YES, IT FUCKING WELL IS! Oh, yeah. Baka-Marco is there too. Just realized none of you mentioned the Raising Heart.
Since What? has been drawing all of us I figured I'd do a few doodles of him so as not to be a filthy ingrate. Spoiler
I still have a stack of 30 games on my hard drive that remain untouched... I get the next sale.
Spoiler Generic plot is generic. Main character is special snowflake. I don't know how much experience you have, but basically everyone writes this kind of story when they first start. It's easy and it lets the reader vicariously play the badass. So you can write, like you actually have the grammar and spelling thing down better than most people and you know how to work with sentence structure. In fact I'm only even talking about plot because you've already graduated from the technical stuff in my eyes. So I'm going to say the same thing to you that I tell everyone that I think has promise. You should keep writing. I can't tell you to have different tastes so I'm not gonna tell you to stop this and start something different, because that'd be stupid and arrogant. So as disparaging as part of my critique may sound I do appreciate you posting this. Keep it up.
It's barely got any text in most pages as much of the series is action not explanation. All the movements are very clear also. It's not like Air Gear where I have to stare at a page for a few seconds to even know where the subject is. So you can basically pick up everything you need in the two seconds it takes to read through the dialogue and then next page it's the same thing. It was still a 20~ hour investment though.
