Aw, how is she doing? 8D
*ish dead* x.X Nah it's good, haha I gotta go eat now too. xDD Be back on in a few hours. xD
>8DDDDDD I've always wanted an Axel plushy.. >_> Why thank you. 8D
It's better to user spaced so there's no confusion with the text. It's my number on habit; Spaces. D: But yes, can't wait for more. 8D
So Premiums get there usertitles changed also? D:
F.E.A.R Best game.
Roxas hit the floor with a WHAM. Landing on his side. "Why...~" He asked talking to himself. Roxas ignored him paying attention to Texna. "You don't know how to play ROCK BAND?!?" He asked. "Your kidding me right?
OOC: Alright then. 8D Sky and Ryo thanks Komui and left his office, heading towards the school. "Do you think these children will make it?" She asked her brother in a worried tone. Roy looked at her in worried. "They will, there young, there innocence should be able to handle that.." He said unfinished. "Well, I don't want to think about it so lets go see who we have in class today." Sky said as she took her golem out.
I get the feeling something bad's gonna happen. xD You should use spaces between commas and periods. 8D
OOC: Thank you. x3 "One, two, three, four.. there that's all we need?" Roxas asked himself as he opened a portal back to the game room to find Axel running around in circles. "Um, please tell me you didn't encourage him to run around like that Pheno." "Shut up loser. I do what I please!" Axel said running faster, running into Roxas making the ice cream fly.
OOC: Recap please? Haha. ;_;
OOC: Recap? I was gonna go to work but I guess I'm not. xD
Username: Skittles Character name: Izumi Sohma, Break Sohma Zodiac animal: Dog Age: 16 Bio: Izumi and her twin brother Break have always been together, helping each other out since there father died and there mother leaving them They've always kept to themselves in the Sohma family. Appearance: http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s313/Fayt360/nekotwin.jpg
Yeahhh, ahaha that's why people don't quote me much because of the colour coding. xDD
When Sora arrived at school he got this sicking feeling in his stomach. "I can't be sick." He thought to himself. "This is my only get away." As he walked into the building he noticed Roxas and Riku talking to each other near their home room classes. "Hey Sora, did chya study for the science test today?" Roxas asked as he approached. "Oh.." He said. "Nope I was to busy playing my mothers 'games'. He thought to himself, as he started feeling queasy again. "Sora, are you feeling alright?" Roxas asked in a worried tone. "Huh? Oh yeah I'm fine it's just..." He said while scratching his neck, blushing. Roxas knew what was going on here; Love sickness. "Alright Sora, who is she?" Riku asked in a amused tone. "Well... promise you won't say anything!" Sora yelled embarrass. "ROXAS!" Shouted a angry voice down the hall. Roxas sighed. "Sorry guys tell me about it later, I promised I'd walk Namine to class." _________________________________ You should go with something like this. Your using the wrong punctuation, and there are still some grammar issues. Take your time and put feeling into your work. This seems dull. It's got a great story line and I wish to read more. Try to work on these issues. Keep up the good work.
I use to be specific about my fonts and size. xD But I don't care anymore because people don't look at 'em.. It's the colours they stare at. xDD
Do I have to post a OC character? Of can I give you a name and what animal? If we need OC characters May I call the dog? Because I have to get off. xDD
Ohhh yum! 8D I've got some random cake in my fridge. xD I like the purty colours but I get lazy from time to time. /: I like the font. 8D
There were some grammar issues. But you should use spaces between commas. May I suggest semi-colon's? To many comma's look sloppy. A little more description on emotion, it seems kinda dull to me. D: But I like were this is going. Keep up the hard work.
Well if the cake was good that's all that counts. 8D Not long. It's easy. 8DDD
