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    D's songs

    I see so that's the way you went about doing it. Very well done none the less amazing job simply amazing ^..^
    Post by: nasirrich, Jan 27, 2013 in forum: Archives
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    D's songs

    This song that you created are you letting go of whatever it could be that's holding you back, but asking for help through it? I can sense a touch in that in this, but over all very well done... But I'm noticing a lot of repetitions at the end of each stanza.(In this case I'm not sure if its called that.) Are you making an extra emphasis on what you just said or repeating so you don't forget what it is you need?

    Ex
    I need a solution
    Please be my solution

    Are you saying that you need a solution so you don't forget?
    Or are you putting an stronger emphasis on the fact you need a solution?
    Post by: nasirrich, Jan 26, 2013 in forum: Archives
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