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    I was a bit uncertain about your writing style at first- I've never read a fanfic where I myself am the main character before. But you've done a great job with it, and after reading the first few paragraphs it became less awkward in my head. Your grammar is excellent but like you said watch the spelling ;3

    Mind the spam in here guys ~ make those posts worthwhile!
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 9, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    Its showdown! [​IMG]
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 9, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    Lets start using it around the forum [​IMG]

    People will catch on :v
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 9, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    Got my scanner up :'D aaaand this is where I realise that my scanner doesn't pick up on some of the more delicate shading ;~; her skin looks completely white when in reality it isnt, I drew shadows.

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    CnC? :B
    Thread by: Juicy, Aug 9, 2009, 5 replies, in forum: Arts & Graphics
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    I'd laugh if you were doing this and your girlfriend was a member of this forum :v

    Anyway, the point is- what you're doing is terrible. >> I ****ing hate players.
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 9, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    OH MY GOD THAT WAS HORRIFYING.

    Your storytelling is flawless, not going to waste time commenting on that. Only ONE spelling mistake in the whole thing- you spelt road "rode"- here-

    "He's probably wondering what a kid my age was doing on the side of the rode like that by myself... he thought bitterly."


    And here's me hoping for a happy ending :v I kind of got suspicious when Axel was driving him to the lake...I REALLY didn't expect the truth though o__o

    Wouldn't the police have seen the bite marks on the body?

    Ugh, Axel is messed up x: I kind of started to dislike Roxas when he started becoming a little...insane though. I like sane main characters, thanks :v

    Excellent story. Although for a while there I thought I was going to have to warn you about going over the PG13 limit >3
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 8, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    Thanks, John :3 Ugh, I don't want all my poems to be sad though D:

    my entry for this months poetry contest. (Theme was justice)


    Justice and Inequity waltzed through the ball
    Spinning and twirling, a beautiful sight
    Justice wore a white gown; Inequity a dress
    But this was not a dance but a battle through the night

    The two foes never met, never quite agreed
    Justice stood for fairness; Inequity felt spite
    While they waltzed they spun, a whirl of good and bad
    Forever a war between what is wrong and right

    Still they dance today, unseen by the world
    Their graceful movements on the balance of a knife
    Maybe Inequity shall triumph, cause our race despair
    Perhaps Justice shall be queen and save the Earth from strife
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 8, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    Surgeon Princess of the Reine


    ...wtf :v
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 8, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone