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    Thanks! :'D <3

    Thanks! :'D <3
    Profile Post by Juicy for Cherry Berry, Aug 4, 2009
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    It's only because they weren't nominated. Which means they arent active enough to be noticed as hot or they dont have enough friends who remember them.

    I realise people are accusing the Gentlemen of rigging the polls or something -_- but seriously guys, out of the people that voted for me, not many of them are in the Gentlemen.
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 4, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    For some reason I misread that as "this place needs more hobos" :v

    Why arent you talking on msn missy? >3
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 3, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    A Poem

    That was very sing-song, almost like a nursery rhyme :v

    Your rhyming was basic but it actually worked really well, except where it's a bit dodgy at the end with "inspection" and "expected" not really working out. Some of the lines seemed to go on for a bit too long and ruined the flow. (Especially the third line from the bottom).

    I wasn't expecting such a...uh, pleasant ending. ;_; Good though.
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 3, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    Some Days

    That was incredibly short but sweet :3

    The repitition was nice, but I'd just like to remind you that you dont need to punctuate the end of each line- they can be run-along-lines. Just thought I'd point this out since it seems at times you've got full stops/periods in the middle of sentences. :3

    Urges to write poetry are good x3
    Post by: Juicy, Aug 3, 2009 in forum: Archives