Oh, I wouldn't eat all of him. Just a nibble here or there....
Before you do, I would highly reccommend looking at your favorite books and look at how they're written. They'll show you the proper grammar used...
No!!! D: Though he IS yummy...om nom nom
SUE!! That is the reaction you will get. At the moment, I would focus more on Mai and nix the twin. Easier writing that way. Keep in mind that...
Barney is a dinosaur from our imagination, and when he comes he's what we call a dinosaur sensation! Oh, look, Barney's on fire
Um...sorta. Like, you could have Mai be from some world, but not be a princess or princess of Heart. No Aerith/Zack parenting and no Cloud...
Well, the first thing is writing up a character analysis of your main character, kinda like an RP, so you can lower the Sue-factor. If you want, I...
Exactly. You roam where a nearby alien attack has occurred, drag your scarf in the general area, and BAM! You just got yourself some Scottish...
A Tom Baker scarf, naturally. Those assist greatly with the capture of David Tennants.
To ZW: Listen, it's good that you're starting to write. I had the same problems when I was starting to write (well, without Bushido's constant flaming, but I did have my share of flames due to my grammar fails). To be completely honest, your character is the standard definition of a Mary Sue. I thought for a moment that you were faking the character, but that obviously wasn't the case. For fanfics, if you have an OC, you need to be really careful. They can't be related to 5 different characters, fall in love with the other ones who aren't related to her, be a "secret" princess, AND be a princess of heart. I don't know if she had a keyblade, too, but that just adds to it. For OC's, they need to be one of the above (minus the keyblade. That's just tacky now.) at the most. For example, you could have a girl for Riku. Or you could have her be Zack's daughter. But she can't be both, and she certainly can't be that mash of intertwining of characters you had. As for grammar, ask you English teacher for some help in how to write a story, or look it up online. Or take a creative writing class. All of these will help A LOT with your writing. Now, all of this is going to take a lot of time and practice to get down. I'm happy to help and/proofread if you want to, so just drop me a PM if you want.
Oh, I have my ways. I shall find one and bring him home >:3
Oh, I loved Eccleston! I cried when he regenerated T_T But I have to say, David's prettier X3
It was in the original script, but they cut it out before it was animated.
So we're doing Les Mis for our school play, and one of my best friends is Marius, which means he sings "Little Fall of Rain" with Eponine, which makes me cry every time I hear it. So they sang it today during practice, and he sang in this soft, sad voice and it brought tears to my eyes. He noticed, and has since been singing that to me all day. Whatever happened to the Freshmen that feared the Juniors?!?!
No, I don't like David Tennant. I love him with the fiery passion of a thousand white-hot suns... Or the two on Galifree XD
Okay, so I was with this guy for almost a year. We moved really fast, and I burned out in about six months, but kept going because of a few bright spots we had after. Conversely, he was head over heels for me the whole time. I broke up with him about two months ago, because it just wasn't fun anymore. I don't want to sound like some thoughtless b*tch or something, but we're only sixteen. Relationships are supposed to be fun at this point, not staying together even though every conversation turns into an argument. Here's my problem: I thought we could stay friends, and I genuinely wanted to, but he never let me alone, and even kissed me once after we broke up (It was just a peck on the cheek, but awkward nonetheless). So I eventually started giving him the silent treatment, because I couldn't handle the constant calling and surveillance (the same thing had happened when we had been together). At the moment, we're past the point of being friends right now, but he's still trying to be my best friend, which he isn't, and tries to check up on my spiritual life (We're both Christian; I was the one who brought him to church, where he converted), which is beyond awkward for me, because I barely want to tell him the time of day, much less how God is affecting my life, especially because he's very self-righteous when it comes to Christianity, to the point of where he essentially said that I was a "bad" Christian. Well, khv? If you can work your magic, please do. I need help on this one.
Demmy. Just becasue I'd love to see him fail at psyching Sora out.
...and Hannah Montana don't mix... Just...no.
I think it's a bit like France, where, if you speak the language, they love you. Therefore, we shall learn to blend. And bag a wild David...
I say we make this simple and move to the U.K. They have cool accents and Time Lords.
