ooc: yeah..... and you just now got out of school? Its 6:08pm though.... 0.o
occ: you could mabey start following Kairi and Renji secretly and pop up suddenly or something like that....
Name: Breanna Age: 13 Gender: Female Parent: doesnt know anything about them.... they died when she was just a baby Apperence:
ooc: lets just say a whole lot.... welll Renji is taking Kairi out to dinner, hinatas soul is captured by Orochimaru and Naruto is trying to save her and Jonny totally ruined the love seen with Renji and Kairi so yeah thats pretty much it..... oh and no ones here right now.
"You handled the weakest one of the gate openers.... Lets see how you handle 2 more....." Orochimaru laughing with furry, "Orochimaru you sent us out to kill this weak pathetic fool? Fine I guess we'll settle for the weak scronny one.... I mean after all, he's better then nothing....." One of the open gate people saying in pitty of Naruto. The spider guy quickly made one of his sticky thread balls and shot it at Naruto while the other one called out his twin brother and they slowly started to detach... just like with Akamaru and Keyba. "Well I guess your now dealing with 3" all saying at once. More of the spiders sticky webbing shot at Naruto, just like with Neji....
ooc:srry got to go bye
ooc: why ruin it? It was getting pretty good.... ooc: ok bye The dragon dies and thuds on the ground.... "Hmm inpressive.... I might have misjudged you...." He then sees Naruto's hand start to bleed from the sharp fang... "Then again mabey not..." He pulls two more and two more gate openers come out...
ooc: ok I left off on the 2nd comment
occ: ok occ: wow thats kinda weird whats going on with you two.... I mean Kairi+Sora would be tons better but its kinda cute whats going on between you two
Orochimaru then pulls two more trigures..... " 4 more trigures to go..... give up yet?" A blood thirsty dragon flys in from above and starts breathing fire
two shurikins come flying out from behind him and stab him right in the back. "Hahaha you really are pathetic!" chuckling to himself
" Here lets make this more fun....." He then pulled two more.... giant snakes and more shonigun came pooring out
"Not so fast.... you leave now and your girlfriend's soul is gone forever! HAHAHAHA!!!!!"
"But how? How could you see the weak spot? You dont have a 360 degrees vision like neji.....Well you know what? It doesnt matter because your dead!" He then went to his final stage and markings covered most of his body occ: oh lol srry completly forgot about it.....
"With pleasure! Hahaha!" he then covered Naruto with the same thing as he did before.... the same trap... but this time Naruto didnt have the help from keyba, akamaru, neji, shickamaru, and choji
"Does it look like im dead? Now lets get down to buisness.... I cant wait to crush your bones!" occ: I know that he went down before choji but im kinda making it up.... and Naruto, keyba, and shickamaru dont know choji and neji are dead or actually im not really sure they are dead but....
occ: lol and I think they are called the open gate people..... from the new english episodes. 2 of them are already dead but... ok back on task "Im the first one of the open gate and I work for Orochimaru.... I also remember going against your friend.... Chogi was it..... and I tore him to shreds... Ha!" occ: not really they both went down
5 more min passed and The first person from the open gate stepped in to the room
the shonigun stopped comeing "You must really like this girl, Hinata.... how pathetic" He then pulled the second trigure
"hahahaha, you just wait...." The shonigun came faster and faster and soon more came out times ten
