It was interesting and I'm liking it so far. Only thing I'd like is to separate the dialogue from what's being described. The story is good but this update seemed rushed. Take your time when describing what's going on and when describing a character. The story is good so far. Keep it up.
Okay. Bye. Talk to you later.
Looking back at it, neither did I. XDDDDD
I literally have no idea. XDDD Ignore it. I'm an idiot.
Ohhhh. XDDDD *stupid*
I see. I don't have burn marks so it won't show I'm fun. Plus, I'm anti-social so therefore I don't like going to parties. ::L:
Having a burn mark on your finger? XD
I don't kno-OMG IT MOVED.
I put ice on it whenever I burn my finger. @-@ Helps a lot.
Put ice on it. DX
On that table over there. *points*
Turn up the fire...? XDD
I don't know. XDX I just said it was.
XDD What the hell. That's kind of mean. XD
What was it? :/8D:
Okay. XDD I didn't get that but okay. XD
Aw. Poor dog. My dog is tearing something apart. I don't know what it is. XDX I didn't talk to him for two days. But last night he decided to...
I don't know. I found a key on the floor and got out somehow. That made me giggle. XD
....What? XD
Make him! Oh wow. XDD I love Break. He's just so damn awesome.