Yeah, I hope I can make more poems like that good (but please without the experience of having to deal with such problems xp).
Hehe :). And in a way, I like it very much, the last one, I think it's one of my best in my opinion, probably because my experience with it though :p
Thanks, yeah, it was a way of letting things go so it helped me to kinda calm down a bit n.n
Haha thanks my favorite fan ;D
Yup, had to post previous poems too cause they were gone ;o. The new one is called waiting
Been ok n.n. Wrote yet another poem ;D
Yeah, they're kinda wrong haha xD. So how're ya doing? n.n
Phew, kh-vids got destroyed ;o
Jeeez, that's bad xo. So was it like a hack or somethin?
Yeah, the site was more or less destroyed ;o. Luckily it's back up, sucks for the vanished posts though xo
Jeez, kh-vids took one hell of a hit ;o
Well, practice and I know you'll make beautiful things n.n
Haha cool, good luck! :D. I also have photoshop but I'm not handy with it xD
Thanks, I like it too. I wish it was me who made it :p It was someone at khinsider who made it for me n.n
The secret truth The secret truth My secret, la verità . The mystery piece of a missing saga. The dark will keep it hidden, they cannot know this enigma ... but he ... She has a secret, I can feel it. Time to rewind and set things right. I’ll find a way into your mind, it can’t hide the truth that you don’t want me to find. Into the darkness, fearless yet blind. ... He will attempt to fight his way through, if only he’d knew ... This secret will break him, overtake him. He’ll be the victim of this venom, the him we know won’t overcome ... he’ll ... I will save us, this I swear, I’m near, I’m almost there. I will know your secret, I ... The two are lost, lost in darkness, confusion spreads like a deathly virus infecting their reasoning as they understand the true meaning of losing. One thing remained the same until the end, they shared the same heart, the same destiny as the two were torn apart ... _____________________ I want you guys to share thoughts on this one with me, what do you think it's about, how do you feel about it, what's the feeling you get from this poem? etc. I hope you like it :) The recovery Gone will be the one, the helpless soul. She too will be left alone. She has to play her final role, the role that no one else would fit. The torch is already lit. Soon it’ll turn ugly, slowly but surely, chaos starts ruling truly. Everyone will start to run, although it can’t be outdone. We will burn for the sins of the daughter and the son. The once blue sky now turned red. “Let's end this freakshow!†The mysterious one said. “He has to pay, I have to save the people he betrayed.†The helpless soul tries to find her way into the dark hole. Loud noises start to penetrate the endless nightmare, beware, there’s a war going on, our whole nation was his pawn. But the end is near, she will appear when we all shed our last tear. Gone are the helpless souls, silence … everyone’s gone at the start of dawn. Right here, right now I’m putting all doubts aside, right here, right now I’m crossing the line. When I come in without a sign, everyone will hide. Time to say whoa, we’re letting go. Right now, these demons are watching me, following me as six becomes nine. Shed your last tear, you will bow right here. Turn back to basics, this is my design! We’re putting all doubts aside, right here, right now we’re crossing the line. When we come in this time, everyone will join for our common goal. We will be fine and you’re letting go. Right here, right now, our destiny unclear, but one thing is known, this is the final frontier. So listen my dear, it’s getting quite near, it’s my vow somehow to face my whole-life fear. I’m putting all filth aside, right here, right now, the final touchdown. Everyone is gone, he has withdrawn. No time to run , It’s going down/right here, right now. Eternal glue The things I felt were true, the things you felt were too. Dawn breaks on for me and you, because of our past this friendship grew. The things I feel now are new. Finally, I understand your point of view. You’re stuck on me with eternal glue, you and me are never through. As the sky burns bright As the sky is burning bright, we will end this struggle, we will end this fight. If you’re darkness, then I’m light. The pain of the innocent will stop tonight. I’m no leader but I’m their hero, Is there a problem? Then come say that here-o. I will not bow, I will not obey. I will save them as I plea, to pull you out of your so called safety. You want to flee, don’t want to stay? No go-time for you, I say no! As the sky is burning bright, we are ending this struggle, we are ending this fight. If you’re their darkness, then I’m their light. The pain of the innocent stops tonight. I’m their hero, you’re their zero. You’re my problem, I have no fear, no! How low can you go when you claim to have control? Before it’s your time to go, I have something to show. Here are the people you probably know, they will deliver your final blow! As the sky was shining bright, we ended this war, we ended this fight. You were wrong and I was right. The happiness of the innocent will begin tonight. Nostalgic hell All these questions, haunting my head, they’re eating me alive, things left unsaid. Take some initiative, I won’t hold back, you’re the one who lost track. I’m left broken, I’m left aside. I was happy but I lost my pride. I was proud of being your special guy, now I’m sick of saying goodbye. All this time, thinking of you. The way you act, the way you do, it hurts me so much … if only you knew the hell you’re pulling me through … Personal guide Let me be your guide, let me help you to find your light. Let me be your guide, let me be at aid during this fight. Let me be your guide, I’ll show you the path that’s right. When life leaves you behind, and fear makes you blind, let me be your guide and you’ll never lose sight. Poisonous words Let go all your anger, let it conquer your heart. It has been a part of you since the very start. It will make you stronger, I know you’re eager to find out. Darkness cannot be destroyed, it can only be channelled, that’s what I found out on the long way I travelled. Darkness means power, you will be baffled. If power is what you seek, see more worlds. Light is weak and dark is strong. So true darkness is the place where you belong. Waiting I want to go all out, no more running away. Without any doubt and without going astray. All I wanna do is go back to the day, where my life wasn’t made out of grey. I’m looking for answers, if only one would come. Though, what are the chances of finding one? I have already succumbed. It has been said and done. The weight on my shoulders must weigh a ton. On each passing day I hope, I pray, for a better time to come, that I’ll be okay. Until that day arrives, this is the place I’ll stay, it’s in the hands of destiny I now lay. Indecisive progress You say you are proud of me. It's my good-side you always see. I’m not the person I was meant to be. My mind’s ready but my heart forgot what’s right and what’s not. Fight the thing I already fought or simply quit and let it rot? No! Don’t you say I’m wrong! Desperate words I have sung to make the decision I made. Play your part and set me free! White turned black I lack a solution to get back on track. You were my Ark 'til light turned dark. The storm came along with the rain They said I’d be ok, that I’d be fine once the sun would start to shine. But the sun never came and I started to think, it made me wonder whether I would rise or sink. Life used to be right when white was still light and black was only seen during the night.
Worn and torn; an unfinished past; unending rejection; painful memories; the new me; waiting; unforgotten Just putting these out there, I know much of them aren't so good but maybe they can give you some ideas ;D. Also you made a typo in the last stanza, the 6th phrase rejection n.n
Light up the darkness Trying to find a way ... I’m shrouded in darkness, trying to find a light, a reason to stay. Sure, I’ve had some help along the way, but all that made me more confused day by day. Light turned to darkness, I became prey. But I’ll fight to see tomorrow and outlive today. I don’t know what to do. Should I let go or take things slow? A dilemma with no end that started with you as my almost-girlfriend. I need some time to mend, to heal these wounds so I can start back again. Are you worth the effort or should I just be another friend? The darkness has gotten hold of me, right now I could even be your worst enemy. Memories start to fade, I’m nothing more than a shade. Even so, I’ll never give up, this is the me you made. I’ll change my destiny, I laugh at fate. What’s this? This dark, it turned into light? Despite the pain I’m shining bright. Hold on tight, I’m fighting my way through. I’m finding my way back to you. _____________________ This isn't the final version, I think there's something wrong with the 2nd part, maybe I should make that more symbolic so it isn't as obvious as it is now? Need some help to make this one better
Courage Courage is the power that makes things come true You have to think positive. That’s what you have to do, in order to be content, don’t repent. Courage is the power that let’s you begin anew you don’t know where you are, you don’t have a clue? Just believe in yourself, I’ll do too. So stop living in the past, the past cannot be undone, And think about the future, have some fun!
I'm going through the same things right now and really, talk to her. I'm gonna do that too with my girl, talk to her about it, ask her why? You have to have an answer to that question in order to move on. This you have to promise me 'cause otherwise you can literally make yourself crazy thinking what went wrong. If you get an answer, then that's the reason and won't have to think about it again. I know what you're going through but we'll get through this!
Ok cool, I again wrote it because of some current events but I'm better now :). I was kinda depressed when I wrote it so sorry if it's a very...
