haha :p. I have project week this week, so I have to work in a company for school, it's like a test if I'm capable to work
Hehe well, that's a little bit too far for me ;D
Phew, I think so too ;o. Jeez, that's alot of things happening on one day ;o
I'm doing good too n.n. This week is gonna be a veeery calm week so it's nice xd
Hello, long time no write, how're ya? n.n
Yes, divide the big chunks of story into smaller, that way you make it more attractive to read. A huge wall of text doesn't invite someone to read it.
If that's the case then I'm fine with it :). Just try to use more paragraphs, that's I think the only tip I can give you at this time :p
Thanks, glad you liked it n.n. Going off, bye bye take care and enjoy your b-day :D
Right, totally forgot about that xd. Anyways, the first part (bolded part) isn't really meant to be poetic (even though I tried to make it to...
Haha thanks n.n. It used to be only the 2nd part though but today I added the first part (the bolded part)
Ok cool n.n
Yup, it's in the same ol' thread :p
Yeah, I'll still be staying young mentally for some years haha xD. Doing fine, just finished a poem like 5 or 10 minutes ago :D. Still waiting...
Haha here the same, on June the 21st 2010 I'll be 18 xd. Jeeez, that sounds weird, 18 xD. How're you? n.n
Life = Art [Someone has problems, doesn’t want to share them with anyone. Someone is depressed, has to figure out some things. That someone isn’t me, but I know you have something on your mind. I’m the one who feels you, I’m one of your kind. Just don’t give up … I’ll be there for you through thick and thin.] I don’t know what’s wrong, the only thing I know is that I’ll be gone before all this falls apart, life can be hard but it’s meant to be a beautiful piece of art. When everything throws you away, keep in mind you’ll be ok. Never lose hope, never lose sight, you’ll be the victor of this fight. Captain Poncho There once was a squirrel named Poncho, but one day he disappeared fo sho. Now all his mates are looking for him, although the chances of finding Poncho are very slim. What the others didn’t know was that Poncho became a fearsome pirate. But after years searching for treasure he became very tired. So he returned to his old home and went in a deep sleep. But during that long sleep, the new owners arrived and said ‘Eeep who might you be and what’re you doing in our tree?’ ’Captain Poncho is the name and remember it well, or I’ll throw you in the ocean and on the bottom you’ll dwell.’
I'm doing fine n.n. Aaand .... HAPPY B-DAY :D
I like the story thusfar but like Chevalier said, you should put more seperate parts of text instead of 2 huge parts. I can also understand Chevalier's point on Stella having more eye for detail as she IS a spy after all, but I think the fact she doesn't have that ability anymore can still be explained in future chapters. Good job, it's really mysterious with a little climax at the end imo. Keep it up!
Good how about you? Just going off actually, cya
Hi tifa, how're ya? :)
Hey dude, how're ya? :D
