If you feel like talking 'bout sure why not n.n. Phew, I counted all my poems I've written so far here on the forums, jeez, didn't know there were...
Your guy reminds me about me ;o. And the 'previous you' (when you had that pain in you) reminds me a little bit of my 'ex' ;o. That's strange xp
That's really good, that means he cares much for you n.n
That's good n.n. I also see when something's on her mind but I didn't see her for like 2-3 weeks because of exams so yeah, pretty sad ;/. Anways,...
That's good n.n. Be sure to communicate with eachother if you even have the slightest problem or something alike, that's the most important thing...
That's quite some time, you keep it up girl ;D
Hehe hi and congrats and the relationship you got there going ;D. And no problem on the editing on your poem, hope I was a little bit useful n.n
Very good poem, although I think it should be 'And you will always have a place ...'? Anyways I really like it because the last 2 sentences can have 2 meanings. 1) He stays with her as most would think or; 2) He's actually saying goodbye and telling her he will always remember her. But that's my opinion on the story n.n. As for a title idea ... hmm ... how about 'Far Horizon', horizon in this case can have 'future' as it's meaning? Just putting this out there, I hope I helped ya a little bit, keep up the good work!
lol I make your life difficult? Suuuure I do haha xD
Hehe yeah, everyone deserves kind words from time to time. I'll be posting more poems in the future so be sure to check them out :D
Now you're just asking for it, I should continue kidding u ;o. You're lucky that I'm gonna sleep though xD. Goodnight and take care and remember...
Thanks for the kind words n.n
Haha got'ya xD
Lol, me was kidding u ;D
Thanks, I think I forgot to say this but 'as the sky burns bright' is meant to be a song :). Do you like my poems? n.n
Wha? Not even me? That's just rude! :c .... Jeez, what did you do that would be that bad not to say it .... even worse than your so called...
Idk xD. I thought my biggest fan would trust me more than this *sniff*
Haha is it that bad? :p. Well if you want you always can PM me ... *subtle hint* ...... Haha no, I kid. if you don't wanna say it, you don't have...
