As I said before, go for it! Nothing to lose y'know. The description of your story here is pretty basic but you can make it a very interesting story with ALOT of character development, which is good so in my opinion, write it :D
Did you like the 2nd chapter? n.n
You're busy I assume? Yeah, here the same, many schoolwork, it isn't even funny anymore ;o
Ok thanks for the help and the compliments. Not sure when I'm gonna write the next chapter but I'll be sure to keep you updated n.n
Haha no, his mom won't be deaf or anything, Robin said that because he was so frustrated that he has to say things more than one time, nothing...
Yeah I know, but I like some funny parts here and there haha :D. I tried to make some funny moments in the story, I hope I managed to do that :)....
Well, now you have the answer why the story's called like that ;D. Although I'm wondering, the first chapter was funny in most parts, was the 2nd...
Sorry for the late reply. Yup, school sucks big time -.-. So how're you doing? n.n
Yup, I didn't want that. Even now it's a little long but this part was kinda necessary. What do you think about the 'plottwist' a.k.a. the ending...
You think it's good? Thanks n.n. So you don't have a problem with the story or something?
Yup very true :D. I hope the 2nd chapter is good
All right, I hope you'll like it n.n
The second chapter is posted n.n
“Watch out!!!” “What the?! …” I jumped aside ‘cause I thought a car would run me over. I looked around me and there was nothing. “Seriously, what is wrong with me today? Nobody’s here, no cars or anything …”. I stood up and looked to the sidewalk. There it was, the lost phone. Who was yelling at me to watch out … for what did I have to watch out? … “Man, why is everyone yelling at me today? Hmm … I better check if my phone’s still working. Hehe, it’s still working, it’s about time I had some luck today hehehe… huh? … 9 A.M.?! Oh man, Mrs. Langland will have my head for sure!” “Aah Mr. Green, so you decided to show up after all? Why are you so late if I may ask? I’m sure you have a wonderful explanation for this.” “Sorry Mrs. but I lost my phone when I arrived at school and I noticed it kinda late. I searched for it, found it and directly went to class.” “Ooh, so you tell me something like a phone, a piece of technology, is more important than my lessons where you actually learn something useful?” “Mrs. Langland, with all due respect but that piece of technology cost a lot of money. I used all my money just to..” “Are you going to talk for a whole lesson or what?! Sit down this instant or that precious object of yours is mine, you understand?! Now go sit there next to Tuck. We wouldn’t want you and John disturbing this lesson now do we?” Tuck is also a friend of mine. I wouldn’t want to call him fat ‘cause that would be disrespectful but well, I’m not gonna say he’s thin either. He loves nature and is very kind hearted. But don’t talk to him in class cause unlike most off my classmates, Tuck actually wants to follow the lessons. That’s why that old hag put me next to him, she knows this. After school we went to the forest. It’s a little forest not too far from my home. When we were little, me and John would go there and play but now we go there with all our friends when school’s done and just sit there, talking about nonsense, laughing, y’know, the usual stuff. I decided to take Eve and Marron along with us today ‘cause I still had to ask Eve out on a date. “So Robin, you come here often?” Eve asked. “Yeah, me and John have known it since we were little kids. We used to play here all the time” “Well, isn’t that cute.” Marron said. I totally forgot about her being here too. If I could, I wouldn’t have taken her along with us but Eve wouldn’t have come along with us since she would’ve been the only girl here. I had to take Marron with us. “It’s so quiet in here, that’s why I like coming here.” Tuck said. “I was the first, aside from John and Robin to come here and now, I couldn’t live without this forest. It’s just so peaceful, listening to the birds whistling, smelling the smell of nature and … a bee! Take it away from me, aaah!” Yeah, Tuck loves nature … but he hates bees. When you want Tuck to scream like a little girl, then bees are the way to go. "Hahaha, I've never seen someone that size run that fast!" Marron laughed. “Dude, you still afraid of bees? They won’t harm you unless you make them mad by y'know running away so please stay still! Marron, would you help me calm down Tuck?” John said. “What? He'll stop running, he can't stay running like that forever y'know.” "Marron, don't say that." Eve answered. Marron looked at her "Ok, I'll help him." “Aight, now be good you two.” John said while smiling at me. He really wants me to ask her today, not complaining though, it’s nice to have a friend like him. But I really hope me asking her out doesn’t affect our friendship or anything. It would be nice to have her as my girlfriend but I don’t want to lose her as a friend along the way. “Hehe, he really is a silly one isn’t he. Hmm we can't keep standing here forever. Follow me, I know a place where we can sit down.” “That’s good, ‘cause I actually want to talk to you about something.” She wants to talk with me? Talk about a turn of events. “Tell me, what did you want to say to me?” “Well … Robin, I hope this won’t affect our friendship or anything but uhm … I think you’re a very neat guy. You’re very funny, always acting cute and … ” She thinks I’m cute? Me, Robin Green, is found cute by Eve Wright? This has to be the best day ever! “ … and well, I think I like you Robin.” She likes me too? She feels about me the same way I feel about her? She even had the same fear of losing me as a friend. I guess John was right after all. “Well, Eve, to tell you the truth, I like you too and I was planning on telling you but hehe you beat me to it.” “Oh, I’m sooo happy I’m not the only one, I thought you would just see me as a friend. I really wanted to say this for a very long time y'know, I'm so glad you like me the same way!” Omg, she actually hugged me *sniff* thank you Lord! “Aaaaw, it’s just too cute!!” “.. Marron? How long’ve you been there?” Me and Eve said at the same time. “Well, I’ve been here long enough and I really think you two are so cute together. C’mon guys, they saw us.” After that Tuck and John came over and they were reacting the same way as Marron did before them and John congratulated me. After that we just talked about school, Tuck talked about how horrible bees are and Marron gave the guys some fashion tips ... even though they didn't want her advice. Me and Eve weren’t really paying much attention to what they were saying though, we had our own conversation going on hehe. “Mom I’m home! … Mom? Hey Russel, how’s my boy, how’s my boy? Been good today?” Russel stared at me and turned his head slightly. After looking at me like that for a few seconds he jumped on me and started licking my face as I was laying on the ground. “Haha, well, I assume that’s a yes. Now that's enough, c'mon man. Hmmm, I wonder where mom is though. I’ll go look upstairs. Mom, where are you? Mom?!” “You’re mom’s not home Robin but she’ll be back in 15 minutes or so.” “What? Who is there? And how do you know my name?” “Haha, you don’t know me but I know you. I have known you for many years.” “Stop talking riddles, who are you?” “Can I ask you something? Do you sometimes have the feeling something’s gonna happen before it actually happens or have you ever felt like someone will say something before they even had the chance of actually saying it to you? “Well, I do often have a feeling like something will happen or someone will say something ... But I know what mom’s gonna say to me becuase I know her so well. And the bus, well, it’s late often so that’s isn’t anything special either … But why are you asking all of this?” “You really think those things aren’t that special? You really want to know do you?” “…. Are you gonna talk or what?” “Hahaha, after all this time I’ve known you, this has to be the most serious yet funniest face you have ever made haha” “ANSWER ME NOW, WHO ARE YOU?!” “Easy now Robin, no need to be all mad at me, I AM your catalyst after all.” “My catalyst…. What are you talking about?” “Guess I’ll have some explaining to do … A catalyst, a dead person's soul who goes into a living person’s body and is left dormant there, waiting to be awakened.” “… You’re not making any sense at all.” “Well, if you would let me finish talking, I would make sense, jeeez, talk about impatience. Anyways, you see, the souls of the people who die become catalysts, bound to one’s body and left there in a deep sleep. Everyone you know has a catalyst but not all of them get awakened. They however can be awakened if the owner of the body, called the carrier, witnesses a strong emotional rush. When the catalyst awakens however, the owner of the body gets powers.” “…Powers?” “Yup, powers. Some examples of carriers with an awakened catalyst are Hercules, King Arthur, Robin Hood, and many others. Ever wondered why Robin Hood was such a good archer? That was his power. Hercules was very strong, people thought he was a son of gods, while in fact that power was because of his catalyst awakened. King Arthur was capable of pulling the sword out of the stone because of his catalyst. And you my friend, gained the power of foresight.” “….” “As for that emotional rush of yours, I awakened when you’re… ” “… When dad died..” “… Exactly. And when the emotional rush is strong enough, after some time, the catalyst and the carrier, the bond between them becomes even stronger can communicate with each other. Normally it would take many years but with you it happened pretty fast actually. But I’m guessing your love for Eve accelerated things a bit.” “Robin, I’m home!” “Well, guess, our talk has to wait.” “Robin, why are you sitting here on the floor?” “….”
Haha xD. I'm almost done with the second chapter, I only have to write the climax now. The second chapter is more focused on the characters...
Yeah, I remember that scene, I thought it was pretty cool actually haha good riddance though, that guy was a real *******.
Yeah, so true and it's a very good movie, Russel's acting is marvelous in that movie. Already writting one page of new material now :p
