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    I really like your poem! The phrases that are being repeated every time are a really nice touch in my opinion (maybe that's necessary for a villanelle? I don't know because I don't know what a villanelle is haha xD).

    I also like how you describe the situation, I can imagine the situation (the mother running desperatly, the alcoholic, etc.) right before me which is really nice. Lastly, it has a nice flow so again, pleasant to read.

    Good job! n.n
    Post by: king_mickey rule, Apr 5, 2011 in forum: Archives
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    You're a good poet man! You have a very wide vocabulary in your head which is always a good thing. I've only read 'Under The Wheels Of Deceit'. I really liked the flow in that one. I'll be sure to check your thread from time to time. Also thanks for the kind words in my thread. Keep'em going!
    Post by: king_mickey rule, Apr 3, 2011 in forum: Archives
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    Thanks, I appreciate your kind words and I'm glad you liked those pieces n.n.

    Today

    Gunshots echoing in the ravaged streets.
    A leader that won’t ever ever recognize defeat.
    Jet fighters flying circles in the Eastern air
    like bombing cities is the solution for unending despair.

    Oil fever is what holds people’s minds nowadays.
    Black gold means money, money equals power raise.
    Millionaires take a shower in millions of dollars
    while poor little children are f*cking dying of hunger.

    People want to move from our dying Earth to space
    even though we haven’t got the means to survive in that place.
    Black and white aren’t different, that is not the case.
    We have one common goal, we all want worldwide peace.

    We can’t deny that we are screwing this world up.
    We have to act before we get out of all our luck.
    Earth is our home and it’s our only one
    for we didn’t get two. It’s destruction cannot be undone.
    Post by: king_mickey rule, Apr 2, 2011 in forum: Archives
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    Issho Ni

    A thousand seas filled with fallen tears
    consisting of sadness and indescribable fears
    are invading the beautiful land of the rising sun.
    People running from a disaster so big
    it even makes the most emotionless man terminally sick.

    At world’s end the earth shook endlessly
    like the 2012 apocalypse arrived way too early.
    Many lives were taken.
    Even more were left broken, alone and forsaken.

    No matter how many power we have to control each other,
    Mother Nature decides all our fates one way or another.
    You’re not alone, we’re in this togetherIssho ni
    Post by: king_mickey rule, Mar 27, 2011 in forum: Archives
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