@ Cariad- I was actually thinking the same thing before I posted but I kept repeating it in my head and it just sounded off for me. XD The beginning of the chapter was very good and interesting. I'm assuming that's her father, though. The ending, I'm not too sure why but I love it. Just the way you described it was good. The middle part I loved the most though. Although it was just dialogue, it was interesting to see Emma reacting that way. Keep it up.
It's fine. ^^ Keep trying. D: No giving up. B| And, thank you. That's sweet of you. You should post whenever you have something in the graphics...
You're welcome. Keep practicing. I kind of wish I had photoshop to make my own graphics, and the skills but sadly I have neither. XD
I saw it and I like it. 8D It's pretty good for your first one, although, the text behind the "XIII" seems unnecessary. It's good though. ^^
Going to start making stuff? 8DD
Hey there. Nothing much. Kind of bored. XD You?
That it was her fault for running away. >> And then I'd probably try comforting or something. XDDD Oh wow. Still sounds like fun though. Only...
I would have felt bad too. But knowing me, I would have probably said something mean...kind of. <-< Oh, that's good. I don't have friends like...
I'm glad. And you should have "awed". DDD: XD I'm glad you're liking the story. Backstory on everyone will be coming soon once I can figure out a few things. Chapter is a bit longer but I was hoping I'd update with two chapters but I ran out of time. Kind of. Quite a few things sounds awkward to me in this chapter, I don't know why. I'll edit whatever I need to edit later. Updated.
Damn it! Why'd you kill her? DX I'm sad now. Grey loved her. ; ; The chapter was good, surprising and sad. Although I don't really like that you killed Krystal, this really has to be my favorite chapter. Grey did show baddassness. 8DD Anyway, sad chapter but good. Hurry with the next one. DDDX
True. How do we get on her good side if she's a ***** though?
XD But being nice to a ***** is hard. DD:
Awesome. XD I had a feeling you would. XDDD
That is true. And if she were to damn us, I don't think it'd be very pretty.
Well then, that's a good thing. XD We should damn Karma one of these days.
Careful. Karma can get back at you. :/gasp:
I love you Karma. << >> Will that do? D:
Oh right. That won't be fun. I should be sure to be careful then.
The thing with my pants. That wasn't very fun for me, but I washed them today. >8D TAKE THAT KARMA.
Oh yeah. I remember my brother telling me about this. I raged. Really badly. It makes me want to shoot people.
