*jaw drops* Wow...for once the grammar and spelling is awesome, especially with the dialogue - no complaints there from me! Although in this part "crows feathers," you forgot the apostrophe, but otherwise...this was great! The only problem was that despite how fast it started, it couldn't really keep my attention...it's good, but it needs...something to keep readers glued to it. But keep it up, I know you can do even better - it's already really awesome! :)
Wow, very good...although I think you meant to say "Other's" instead of "Others perspective"...but otherwise, great job. Although the end, 'alone' it sounds...I don't know...like some other word would be better. Such as 'abandonded' or 'Forgotten' or something...it just needs a word with a stronger impact instead of 'alone'. But overall, I really love the poem, I can really see the emotion in this...
Very nice poem, Kairi~!! *claps* I can't really find anything to critique, great job. :)
Aww, that's so sweet...great job. :) Although in the second verse, I think you mean to say 'when I'm mad' instead of 'when I mad'...or may use 'angry' instead of 'mad'...either way is fine. Overall, awesome poem! :glomp:
Basically what she said. lol But also, be sure to try to use more target words...not repeating the same one repetitively...don't be afraid to use a thesarus/dictionary for help if you need to, I have before. xD
Since you're so awesome in making these signatures...I have to ask...is there any way you can smooth over the signtaure I made (it's the second one)? :sweatdrop: I made it, but it looks so clumped up...I could give you the pics I used to make it if you need so...if you don't do that...well um, sorry to bother you!
Hmm...something about it seems a bit...off...I'm not the best signature maker, so I can't say exactly...but something about the mist/fog is almost too distracting...sorry if my advice/critique is not so good. :sweadrop: But for the most part, it looks great, good job! :)
I've never read it, but I heard so much about it...is it really that good?
OOC: Huh? I did...sorry if I did something wrong...my knowledge of Naruto is limited. XDD
Um...I'm more than likely going to get this wrong, but uh...Gummi Bears from Nightmare Before Christmas? Either that or Gummi Bears from the Gummi Bear show...xD
Hmm...Finding Nemo. I loved it so much, I watched it over, and over, and over, and over...XD
Disneyland (in California). It's like, the very first one (I think), and well...I've always been going there since I was a kid and it's always enjoyable. XD
Namine shifted, trying to squirm away from Kisame's grip. "Let me go..."
I've noticed most (popular) animes have spawned a game of some sort...such as Naruto, Dragon Ball, Yu-gi-oh, etc. In my opinion, they aren't so good...in games, one of the most important thing is the story (for me anyway...) and since it's based on the anime, there isn't much of a plot (or it's way too predictable since it's a copy off the anime). It's basically fight, fight, fight (or dueling for Yu-gi-oh...). If there are other anime-based games that aren't like that...then I have yet to see them (I haven't seen a lot of anime-based games actually so that's why my opinion is like this xD). So what's your point of view on this?
Totally...although Pokemon at first wasn't that bad...oh, and the English version of Sailor Moon was also quite disappointing...as was Death Note...I mean, I've heard so much about it but it's just...not that interesting...after the first manga volume it just gets less...intriguing...
Well, I think it's a coincidence really and well...it's not that much of a biggie. Really, the only thing I find quite similar to Dragonball is Super Sonic and Super Shadow (from the game, Sonic the Hedgehog)...but even then, it's just a super form, and often those look somewhat like that, with a golden aura...at least I think so...lol
My very first anime was Sailor Moon. It's actually not that bad...and even now, I don't mind watching it every now and then. lol *high-fives Heartless** Oh, ooh, I have that last season too...isn't it totally awesome?! XD
In the "tasks" section, there's a place where you can change it, titled, "save to my computer". Go along with the instructions there, and it'll be a piece of cake. :)
I never heard of it...why exactly do you think it's good?
Has anyone bought it? Or at least listened to some of the songs (You have to at least have heard Gimmie More...)? I have the CD and the songs are awesome. Some aren't to my liking, some are, but overall, it's great, better than her last CD, In the Zone. Now, I know some people will say they hate Britney or whatever, but this is her music we're talking about, not her, so...please limit any flaming. :)
