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LMBO!!!!!!

true, and stop watching death note too. XDD

kinda pricey, but if it makes things look this good then, it must be worth it.

btw , why would someone make a video , thats so different from something like KH?, a grocery store ....please, i doubt KH would ever occur in a deli XD.

enough, pity fest, bring her back , now!
you know if you act all needy and think like that everyone will hate you.

so you better stop running away, if you run away, you will never do anything.

if you start self-pity , then youll feel miserable, but not because of people, but because of yourself.

if you dont believe in what you can do , who will?

Well, the first time, i actually read it all, and i said to myself "this plotline, doesnt really add up" and when i told my friends about, they started laughing XD.
though, i still read the text bubbles in the wrong order XD.

ouch hun, im sorry, let me help you.

the main, character needs more backstory, even when she's the "smart beautiful teen, who's different from everyone", she still needs a better protrayal, everything she does, how she reacts, i think you got the feel of a real teenage girl right there.
wich is actually very good , because its a breather from fictional personalities.


this actually sounds, like a diary of sorts.

okay, the writtring needs more detail.

not too much just try to describe things a bit, but because of the nature of the story "being told through the eyes of a teen, this part isnt that prominent.

now, since youre character does not sound fictional , the characters around her shouldnt be either(or at least not all).

now, the ending part was really...beautifull, except that, the boy, is the kind of "prince charming type", if something this is fine if he doesnt really talk that much, but overall he's ok.

i actually, liked the fact that it was short, not really a hassle to read.

but not as fluently, as trogdor, i suggest you check out her stories.

btw, hun.

you need to take everything positively, you see, some people might like your work, some might not.

you know trogdor , really gave you great advice, instead of feeling bad read it.

because if she really didnt care , she would have just left an insulting comment.

or just critized your bad points without advice, so dont bite the hand that feeds you.

as for you

diamond angel

the scarred for life thing.

sorry , but giving her self-pity, wont help at all.

i think trogdor gave her great advice, and if you read the story , you should have done the same.

and youre comment about no feelings, trogdor is a girl , and im a boy, how's that for you!?

next time think things through before saying things like that, k?

so, SoS , dont feel bad, just keep going , practice makes perfect.

and be thankful, that an arrogant person didnt come here, that it was me and trogdor, because, people can be really rude at times.

and trogdor was firm and down to earth.

now, do you have a second part?

well , wait !!

i just know, the org member there is the secret 14th member!!!

and her weapon is that knife!

omg, i knew nomura would reveal more XDD.

joking of course.

that can never pass off as KH material.

though sony vegas must be a really good movie maker , to be able to make this.

i was convinced it was fake by the hoods, they dont have zippers .

though it was well made.

well im not so sure about that

but ill take your word for it.

though sounds like something a girl would...a tomboish

oh....youre a girl....i didnt think you were

kinda eases my mind you are though.....

though i still think your post was kinda harsh.

ouch, so much for softness.

way to let her down easy .

so much for trying to be nice.

it would be interesting to see how would you react to this situation without the screen in front of you

the one that covers you....the one that portrays your words.

though you are right so i will commend you for your critique.


kinda like what i said , but more detailed and way harsher.

so, who's not to say that they had a second keyblade wielder?

perhaps they though two keyblade wielders are better than one

of course as soon as they could fill Kingdom hearts the better.

once the 14th member wasnt in the picture....they needed roxas even more.

well

i picked demyx

he kinda died because of sora's stupidness.

and then roxas, because his counciousness just melted into sora's XDD.

axel can die, in the end he just wanted to be with his lover....wich he says himself is selfish.

then lexaeus, because he wasnt really evil, just loyal.

so in smarts they would both lose

i mean, he trapped the keyblade with oathkeeper, and he was like

"how!?" .....umm yeah, we kinda figure the keyblade master can call upon his weapon.

i guess roxas didnt XDD.

but i would have to say roxas

why?

because roxas is way more willing to fight than sora, and he's way maturer, and has more intent to kill(even though people dont die in KH

well

if she is aqua*gets shot*

she's in the room where xemnas talks alone

or at least i think.

or it could be they gave her a back story at the last minute and since KH2FM+ was already released they couldnt do anything.

XDD

well, i just like the sexy style of the video


and the makeup they gave rihanna.

creepy

is that jelly...give me- OMG its blood!!!!!!!

ahh, run *hits face in wall*

ouch!.

hmm, we can speculate that

in BBS they have "lesser" keyblades

or atleast keyblades without keychains.

the teenage cookie cutter drama

not to mention an weird main character

she's mean, and to top it off the writting needs some work

but it was fun to read, i liked it.