Nice. I like how it fits your avi.
Yes, well, we saw it coming. That night? The things he said? We all saw it coming, or at least I did.
We aren't saying that. We're saying your story is good. I liked it, I'd read more. We're trying to offer constructive criticism. Your work is good, stop beating yourself up about it. A little more time, and it could be even better. The grammar and spelling might make it so some people don't even read your work. And it's good. Your work is good. So, type it out in a word processor, or run it through spell check. We're just trying to help.
Okay skjkdl;k;ad
Loxare was giving criticism. He said he liked the story, he just gave some tips. I'm interested in the story, and I'll read the next update, although you might just type it in Microsoft Word first, so that it can clear up some spelling or grammar errors. The story itself is so far so good.
Hey, 'sup bro. Glad to see you'll be in The Ultimate Crossover. It'll be fun to RP with you.
Happy birthday~
I thought you were going to say the best part is the chocolate.
I'm all for this, and the Pesterchum usage sounds fantastic. Let me know what I can do to help.
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I'm just going to post in this thread.
Scott shuddered and walked in after them. He slowly looked around the train, pulling his jacket tight around him. The pink haired boy was still in the same position. He glanced up at Alice and Oz."Should we... like... Shake him? Luffy turned and glared. He bent to his knees and picked up the tray, turning to the guests. "May I... Take your order?" he said, turning his head to Scanty for clarification. Rose crossed her arms and loomed around. She could see no signs of life, at least in her immediate vicinity. She sighed and began walking in a random direction, keeping alert to watch for danger.
It... it's beautiful.
Yes, but TIME TRAVEL
Yes, but say THAT GRACEFUL ASSASSIN BECOMES HIS OWN GRANDFATHER
All day every day
But if you did that, you would have no purpose to create a time machine in the future/now. Thus, you would not have created the time machine, or gone to the Con. You would then recreate the time machine, eventually trapping yourself in a cycle.
KIDNAPPIN IS AFOOT Fortunately, we'll still have 999 lives.
Scott bit his lip. This was becoming stranger by the second. He was beginning to suspect he'd begun hallucinating a few minutes ago. Luffy stared up at the ceiling and groaned. Stupid demons. He glanced back at the clothes they'd given him. Why did he have to wear these? What were they doing up there? Probably something important. He sighed and began putting on the clothes. They had better let him up there soon. The wind blew over the girl's face, lightly lifting strands of her hair. She slowly opened her eyes and gazed into the sky. She slowly got to her feet and took in her surroundings. "Well. This is new." Spoiler: Character Sheet Character: Rose Lalonde Age: Thirteen Sex: Female Series: Homestuck Picture: Spoiler Weapon/Ability: Rose's main weapons are a pair of enchanted knitting needles called The Thorns of Oglogoth, (That is, unless these are too powerful for the RP, in which case she'd use the Needlewands). The Thorns can created thin, powerful beams to attack from afar, although they can be used for stabbing as well. She, as a normal kid, has very little other abilities. Additional Information: Rose is intelligent and cunning, and will use all means to get ahead. She's talented at puzzles, and all affairs of the mind. She is slowly becoming corrupted by the Thorns (along with some outside "help"), and has since begun breaking rules and using darker abilities.
I'd have to talk to my lawyer before doing that.
