It's good so far. You were right about it jumping in a lot quicker, which is pretty good. I be too tired to concentrate on doing brain thingies,...
Luffy groaned. "Damn, I forgot we're gonna be in the water. I can't swim." he said, grabbing a water bottle. "No big deal," he continued. "I'll probably do something awesome." Scott spun his head to Jolyne. "Whoa! You okay?" he asked, his words getting somewhat muffled by the speed of the subway.
Quite. quite indeed.
I didn't know KH Characters were in it. Coolio. Anyway, their powers are all so intensely awesome. Creative, too. Really good work. Also, judging...
Alrighty, thanks.
The intensity.
Just seeing the penguin on the little video picture made me want to go. But, yeah, I liked the first one well enough. It was pretty cheesy, but there's not always something wrong with that. I'll probably see it.
Sure, I'm not reading anything else at the moment, and it sounds good. You can wait to get some more done if you want to.
Dare I ask for a link? To the past
Wow, nice. You're power-working.
Indeed. Project G.E.H. I liek.
No, I mean, I keep clicking the Encyclopedia Dramatica link. It's awakened my past.
Your signature keeps getting me distracted from everything.
Luffy shrugged and began to disrobe. He looked at the guests around him. "It's not a show, get ready." He turned to Reinforce. "You ready?" OOC: short.
Kyeahahhahahaaheeeees. Brilliant. I like the connections between a few established characters, as well as the numbers you just throw in. The character's personalities are all defined. There are a few cases where a comma would be required, although they are few and in between. I must reiterate my original point of kyeahahhahahaaheeeees.
These kids are f***ing insane. They have absolutely no moral conscience, no care for animals, and an overall lack of caring.
Deceit is what we're here for. although i am quite surprised they didn't break
My favorite track would have to be either Grand Spree or Disney Drive.
I love the choice in background music you have while browsing KHV.
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