this is no fun, once repliku speaks with his gigantic essays, there really isnt much more to say...XD. oh repliku and his essays....*sigh* anyways i really dont think fundraising should not be done. i know most of it is for converting ect, but most of it goes for charity work too. but back into the topic. taking belief from people is one of the worst things one can do. of course some extremists , just get on your nerves and push you to conversion. but people need to have choice(wich includes beliefs)once you take away their beliefs, people will feel forced. but really if people believe in something, we need to accept it, wether it be religion, or some kind of occidental teaching, or a cult, as long as they dont break laws. im sure that if you believed in something, you wouldnt want it to be taken away, no matter how ridiculous it is, nor would you like people forcing you into a change that isnt genuine.
your words present a grim future..... im with you on the fact that the catholic church changed things to their will. but not letting people believe...do you really know what this imply's? the triangle example isnt the best one to give, because we KNOW the world is round it has been proven , but we can and cannot deny the existance of a God ,because we really cant say its not real. but most people take religion as a tradicional thing.
quoted for thruth. i would understand the fireworks. but not only do they give a bad example worldwide, they give a bad example to something that was portrayed as a way to unite people.
quoted for thruth. i dont really like naruto, but if you have to choose between watching crap and this...anyways. i think the fillers are dragged out...way dragged out, not only that , but the fights are overly boring...and also dragged out. in the original AND in shippuden. of course i was overly dissapointed by this series as its started going....shonen..... the plot change was rather drastic....and too epic. the concept is good, but it was presented with overly dragged fights and too slow or too fast character development.
XD. this was rather.....lol...interesting. and funny.... the skittles thing....and thr HSM music....that was funny lol. *thumbs up*
Exactly, nintedo sells better because of its price, its family oriented games among other things. but the PS3 far excels as a system. and the PS3 is more online friendly than the Wii.
tell me about it.....that was so...irritating...i had to get it from the web too. another bad book was "la llamarada"......i realized i was slowly dying from reading it, so i skipped it all...and looked in the web to get a review.
well welcome this site offers a variety of topics in wich you can discuss and make friends. so have fun and follow the rules.
so youre venting it with a poem. its good, i guess creative venting is a good thing. and hope whatever is the problem, you can get it solved.
do people come advertise here? because im gonna post an original story and i wanted to know if this was the place to get advice. though...ive already finished chapter 1, and the prologue(needs some work). but im gonna start posting once i finish writting chapter 2.
well, its nice. and it delivers the message. but i wanna see lyrics that dont involve heartbreak, or love.
well sony offers variety. and nintendo decided to take a different approach to the console wars. but nintendo lacks some game genres....like RPG..wich has a very large fanbase. and the PS3 is blowing things way, the graphics, the content to download, the games, ect. but that doesnt mean nintendo is bad, because the DS has a good variety, while the Wii focuses on party games.
repliku was just a minor character. he isnt even important, he was a faulty tool to the organization, and as such meet his end. but what i dont understand is why did they eliminate him after he helped sora and all. but in the end i guess they needed to eliminate him.
they shot a bystander? i cant believe this...if the police force cant stop a man who was severely shot, then maybe we should get self defense training. because we dont know when something like this might happen to us.
well...im going to be serious about this...before other writers come and destroy your work lets see....it has a lot of grammar mistakes and is short...very short. just try to double check the sentences....so they dont have any mistakes..or at least keep them at a minimum. and try to really define the characters....since you placed so many in the first part....the just fall into the common category. just emphazise a bit on them. and try to give your story some consistency.....because , i couldnt really understand 100%, what was the exact situation. and also try to make your story a bit longer. if you take all of this into consideration...youll get it right very soon. just dont stop...keep going.
