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blown off...

anyways shades resalted the P.O.V thing i said.

and ect....he just broke it down a bit more, you know?....

and also went all destructive on your work XD.

but, its good that you are able to understand that we are trying to help you (or in shades case destroy you)so you can be reborn from the ashes(after all shades pulverized you) and be a better writter.

ill check on this story often.

btw, you dont have to change the plot, its just bettering it.

this is really, nice

i can barely tell a whole story with poems.

and this feels so lighthearted but sad at the same time.

i liked the repetition too.

that's a very interesting choice...

why don't you have any visitor messages?

hey cheer up little dude!


you are not alone.

even though it may seem that way.

you are not alone.

and even though you think life feels wrong, you must remember that

your pain WILL come to pass.

trust me , eventually it will, but if you want it to change faster, then you can't sit around, crying ,waiting.


you have to stop pondering on the bad things in life.

at last someone understands.

once this code can be used on a full-playthrough or similar.

then it can be considered.

because of the DMA you won't be able to go much farther than that room.

and yet, i think it should be ported, if only to please everyone.

and they can try it out for themselves.

oh, i certainly think so.

and more if SE wants to milk FFVII as far as they can , this is almost necessary.

wow, this isnt the best piece of work.

and yet i feel something from it, strong feelings.

and you managed to convey the feelings through this poem.

well, i can't say its bad.

but to tell the thruth, it would be preferable if you stopped using the P.O.V thing, i don't mean stop using the tactic, just blend it in with the writting, also this needs to be a bit more descriptive.

other than that, keep going, and please stop the threads about canceling the story.

why?

well, it only makes your story look bad, if your story is good, then there is really no need for you to do those kinds of things.

other than that i think that the first chapter should be a bit more descriptive(and longer)

needs better spacing also.

specially in convo's beetwen characters.

what's wrong with you!?

this is the worst thing you could do to your fan-fic.

now , it just seems like youre cheaply trying to make your fan-fic popular.

you shouldn't be making stories , if you think they are about people commenting on it.

if they don't comment, well...can't do anything about it can you?

if youre that desperate,i'll read it and comment.

but i feel ive lost most interest just by reading this post.

oh well...nice taking your stuff *grabs wallet*

just desserts?

no, she doesn't have any blessings, because she doesnt have any friends.

and im sorry to hear about your friends, but this is not a pity contest.

at least you had friends, she only has people who will turn their backs on her.

wow, i never would have expected her to do that...

man, the people in your school , really, REALLY , need to grow up.

i mean, if their friedships are merely based on such petty things, then they don't deserve to even have social lifes.

you shouldn't have to take that, and i expected you and DA to be above the whole appaerance thing, but i won't hold it against you, because the pressure is hard.

it sucks to be in your possition.

tis all good.

except that, its kinda sad that inspiration comes from such an uncomfortable situation.

DA is still on that trip, eh

i can´t believe they did that to you, anyways, since youre in the ¨popular¨ group, i suggest that you keep it so, even though you may not like them, try to be on safe territory even if it is unstable, considering they might turn on you.

at least until you can get things cleared up.

i didn't say i wanted to join.

i was just asking, what purpose does the bunny castle serve?

what is this place?

a bunny castle?

what purpose could a bunny castle serve?

XD.

i would like to meet a lot of people, except the popular ones,like CTR and repliku, even though they are good people, i know im secretly hated. >.>
well, i would like to see cupcake's lifestyle.

trogdor's school life

PAW's way of acting.

heart of darkness(to see if he's really that shy in real life)

there are others

oh Pyro' and how she does on college and Real life as a whole.

there are more like archawesomeman, he can't be that awesome irl.

Absol for constantly leaving user notes(even though most were spam)

i would list shades, but....well, its complicated. >.>

there's a lot more im just forgetfull

oh yeah...

cherry , because she seems nice.

tora-chan, because she's highly creative.

shadow of sephiroth, just because.

there are more people...