oh this kinds of settings are my favorite. though i've never been able to put them to use. and the italics are for , what you told me? this is going great, it was so nice to read something as good as this is.
yeah, i read it, actually a while ago, didn't post because, well, i noticced , i keep commenting too much. i really want to see how you manage to incorporate church and callum, back into orbit, and also the glaive girl.
well, im not sure if to partake or not. because i'm still not sure if using such a closed scenario, like the one given. it kinda contracts any creative juices, of course it gives you starting material , but there are only so many ways it can go , like , okay you find the Dog?, and then, some people might repeat plot, due to it not being open enough. of course this shows our skill with writting with restraints, but it also destroys one main thing that could be used to jugde the works. creativity, instead it's replaced with spontaneuety(sp?) there are good things and bad things about this. at least that's what i think. i would definately prefer something more open, but i would also like to see how can i work with something like this.
oh, the weapons you draw are always so cool. but, i don't know if this was intentional or not. the girl's long skirt doesn't really fit the anime style short-skirts and curved wimen, can't say i dislike that, because her body proportions are more realistic, and less pre-defined perfect. though , i think the legs should have been, just a bit more bigger.
guys , im really, sorry, im uber busy. when i say that i mean, that i have a competition , choir, volleyball, classes, tutors. and thats only half of it......i feel so bad, i really wanted to be here, but i was so tired after doing projects and assingments. im...really sorry, i really am.
well, the reason for being against porn....its because porn, surpasses the boundaries. and therefore its for adults...which can reason right from wrong, you show porn to a kid, lemme give you an example. a child saw a glimpse of a porn movie in wich a man....he licks.....you know. and then, when he saw a birth tape, after the kid is born, the mother starts explaining to the child "and after the child is born, they start cleaning the mother". and the kid interrups "yea mommy, the doctor cleans it up with his mouth"......>.>....this is veridic. now, another thing is the fact that people should treat sex like it should be treated , not some unspeakeable taboo. but you are right in the part of violence.
to most people these poems may seem inacessible. but, i truly love them.... one of these days i will write something decent that can top your poems.
ooc: okay, i now truly have to go bic: "Epidemic...." he said in a muffled tone. OOC:bye, b back tommorow.
Etcal moved a little bit and prepared for battle. "ive been looking for oracles, and this was the closest place, now..." he looked at the oracles, and back at the broadcast guy. "lets resolve this, and the oracles will be on their way"
As soon as Etcal moved , he stopped to see the ensuing battle "leave the oracles alone" he said as he looked at the broadcast guy. "if you don't....." he stopped as his hand was soon covered in some form of light energy.
ooc;okay, guys take the lead. im not sure what to do....
ooc: Now , who's the broadcast guy? and what now?
ooc:oh no! i made them TOO similar, this isnt good...well OC's powers differ greatly from his, my character is more support based. can we continue.....oh wait...you dont mean she actually said yes!?
ooc:im not into creating cars....he can make things like....swift strokes with the particules , wich he molds into a slash.....not cars and stuff....and also gather energy particles around his body to accomplish different effects. that kind of thing. and ethercalibur project....that's what his main attack is, a bashing blow by concentrating energy into his hand, creating the same kind of destructive energy as a blade...but a bit more explosive. think shunkÅ....if you know what i mean...or something similar.
ooc:k, but im not sure of the whole situation....are you being attacked by him, should i save you?....what? BIC: as swift as a shdow leaving an afterimage....Etcal moved. ooc:can't think of any name....who is the broadcast guy >.>
that means im in? okay...so where should i be? i wanna get involved. briefing on the current situation please?
Name: Etcal Age:15 race:civilian,oracle Weapons: none(not yet) Appearence: Personality: collected and kind, but somewhat naive, and yet very bright if needed. powers: creation & destruction Explanation: his powers can manifest the particles in the air to his will, but his power is undeveloped, and cannot be used to its full potential yet. can be a resourceful power or a destructive power. history: set out to look for information, once his father left a letter saying that he had to help "oracles" his father died a couple of days ago , mother left them, and he's trying to look for these so called oracles., he was experimented on as a child but never taken from his father, his father being the head of the "Ethercalibur" project. so? can i join?
youve made it better. thats good. now this seems much more promising. some minor grammar errors like "stuffed" instead of "stuff" and well....its getting better. i might just suggest some characters.
lemme...wait *checks tags* oh no *facepalm* anyways. you need to be more descriptive, i felt this was very undefined, and what is the girl's name? ella, or Gabrielle?....if its not gabrielle, then i suggest that you spell check things before you post them. and she bumped into a boy about her age? how could she tell by only bumping into him?(if she bumped him, it was because she didnt see him) after he talks to her, i think you should have placed her estimation of his age and a more descriptive sentence about the boy, and im not reffering to the clothing(clothing shouldn't really be that much of an emphasizing point, unless needed) like when she changed. anyways use italics when characters are thinking....and this needs spell check...it is also short, considering the descriptiveness it needs. anyways, if i think of any characters, i will surely come to you.
well....i like your use of words. and how you use words like these: instead of going "it's never without its meaning." it is good.
