I was finally able to get around to take a look at this and I must say that this is absolutely beautiful sir - bravo, bravo indeed. The pacing is rather excellent most of the time and the usage of second person was pulled off rather masterfully - members were written in a very realistic manner (with Misty being the exception of an interesting psychopathic personality) and the characterization of both the mood and the city in itself was very interesting. A few grammatical mistakes here and there but they certainly do not detract from the wondrous factor of your story. I will continue to keep up with this, indeed. I must say that the addition of Dave to this story is an excellent choice.
My time residing in Antarctica has permitted myself to note that the beaches here are perhaps the greatest in the world.
Please do not thank me, madam - the greatest thanks you may deliver is to see you sans worry.
Ah, madam, it is fine, you really must not apologize. I am an ear to listen. I most certainly understand the feeling, madam - it occurs with...
Congratulations on your coder success, my good sir.
Indeed, I have heard that the Chinese are a wonderful Domination-based civilization. Goodness there are so many civilizations to play with such...
Oh no, venting is most perfectly fine - it is quite better to get such off your chest. I am positive when I say that they certainly do enjoy your...
Only Reptar would be able to travel back in time to the 4th Century.
I am flattered you think as such, madam, thank you. The other Voxli-goers are also quite nice in themselves, they are simply quite close in their...
Ah, I see - that should be quite convenient. I would presume such a quick victory would be even further cemented with civilizations such as the...
Cracks? Not crevices, fissures, or holes? How dare that young lady!
Norse spiritualism.
Humans outside rat holes are indeed quite common.
A rather effective strategy? Hmm, I see - I presume it involves the factor of unit use, or is it something to do with buildings or technology? Ah,...
I presume Neville Longbottom is in fact Neville Chamberlain.
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?113159-New-Owner
He appears to be quite the trustworthy man.
I do not believe the sliced bread present here is luminescent, sadly.
I quite personally, welcome our new autocratic overlords owner with open arms. But on a rather serious note, it is quite a pleasure to have you as our new owner as such. We shall most certainly hope you feel quite at home in our forum.