Oh, i forgot to mention.....i've never sang rap.....the closest i've ever gotten to that sort of style is reaggueton....XD. Oh i'm so bored lets do some sort of music stuff together....k?
Woah, if that's your voice, then....wow. it's good. though....the second song....yeah it's recorded in a bad quality but that's no problem at all. i'm no expert but your brother's voice it sounds almost forced..., the style, I mean. You have a good voice, and the emotion you placed....it was amazing. you better record more stuff for us to hear....it would be a shame to miss such a wonderful talented voice. Oh....sidenote.....maybe you should join the audio arts group....that would be awesome oh , almost forgot.....either you or your brother should be back up vocals....one thing i did notice was the lack of any sort of harmony. you need to work with your bro on how you guys want to sound together....your voices need to feel good together.
Hey guys I thought it would be good to present tutorials on how to progress in writting. these were posted originally by Destiny's force and Zandyne. Components of a story Advanced Guide on MLA writting Anyways the second one is a bit advanced but it might help you nonetheless. Credit goes to DF and Zandyne.
Well....you could use a filesharing website like media fire or....you could attach it directly to a post. yup.....www.mediafire.com
Who or what is 4chan? It is a shame that he killed himself, really... in the movie Evilman mentioned, the killer knew people were truly evil at hearts so he let them "kill the subject" that was the true point of the movie really, how cruel people truly were. Well...even when the guy wasn't the best person.....death is never an exit....it's just death. Living is pain.....dying rids of all pain....but you cease to exist.
this is very sad, but it's good. i hope you do allright, and the people that have a problem like this too.
It doesn't help in finding love, it just helps in getting a girl(it doesn't guarantee love) because most of the time....no,no all of the time, the first thing we are attracted to is the physical. but...over time, i come to know that an ugly face you can get used to and love, but an ugly personality.....now thats another story.
So you're incorporating the twilight thing, so everyone knows who is narrating, pretty clever, maybe i should do the same to my story. the chapter was good, the flashback was good too....the emotions are good, it's all right.
well, that was kind of...sad. I liked it but maybe it should explain a bit more, even when it's not that long.
You judges did read ALL of my poem right? (maybe i shouldn't have made it invisible, ok won't do that again i guess)) I just came here to say, that my entry will come very soon, so wait for it please.
Okay, okay, i will have to fix this because, the situation in it wasn't understood....okay...guess being too subtle is a bad thing. yeah, time to re-write. I'm not sure then how to make the transition from third to first.
well....i'm fine i guess.....just a bit tired, things to do , clothing to prepare, band to arrange....yea that kind of boring stuff. otherwise fine....oh, i noticced everyone posted some bio where they explain how the want proffesional.....all of you did that...is that a requisite?
OK whatever you say, just throw things my way....i'll hit any note any way i can.... i may not be the best, but i can mess with the rest......>.>, boy that was lame XD.
XDD. if you call a mic a recording equipment XD. but if that doesn't work....i could always help out with lyrics and stuff. truly i'm not really adept at recording...i'm well just used to hogging the mic XD. so...maybe i could help out even when, i have no recording equipment(except a mic XD) i could help with lyrics and stuff....yeah and with vocals if possible XD.
Well okay....whatever you say, just give me...anything to work with! i'll be glad to do it.
OK finally updated to chapter 4. I've been very busy lately.... the chapter is called "like kids in the rain" i'm unsure of it, can someone CnC? here is the link: Fate
Well....depends what exactly does the group collaboration imply?
Fate 4: Like kids in the rain. *Richard* We both stood staring at each other for a few moments before Faite finally decided to speak on his account. “Quite a debacle the one that occurred here, eh?” The strange boy said moving slowly through the expanse of space on the hill. If there was something strange, it was this, why was he following us? , could it have only been a coincidence his appearance here? , the fact of the matter was that I was too afraid to ask, it had been merely two days of class with him, and yet he made me feel some sort of urge, one to be alert around him, I couldn’t explain it as something more than a feeling. “Are you feeling well?” He asked, I couldn’t exactly read his face; he had a smirk, almost as if he knew I was afraid, but I wasn’t really showing any sort of fear. “I’m fine…..umm, why are you here?” The inevitable question that had to be asked, but I tried to hide my questioning intentions; I felt that maybe making any mistake would hurt. “But, really why should I feel this, how much harm could another student do?” “Oh? Don’t worry, I just came because I was looking for Damian, but I guess he wouldn’t want to talk right now, he seemed mad” He shrugged slightly looking at the ground as he kicked some grass. “You’re lying”I muttered under my breath, almost as if the thought slipped from me. This wasn’t right, the feeling was too wrong, he was lying I could just feel it on the back of my head. As soon as my face showed a more serious tone, something even stranger happened, Faite’s calm face slowly had a smirk, and his Green emerald eyes now seemed to radiate some sort of glow that reflected sinister intentions. Just like in horror movies, when the guy you least expect is the killer, yes maybe that could describe my situation. “Am I imagining this?” I just kept looking at him, as a cold feeling went upward through my body. “You catch on quick…..oh, but I just came to talk…to you” His fine accent was now gone, and his face seemed darker, if I needed to run it would have been at this point, but I couldn’t will myself to do so. I finally saw the true colors of the new kid, he didn’t look that menacing, but for some reason his face and his words sent chills through my body; I moved back a few steps of what I considered to be a safe enough distance, posing myself in a defensive stance. “What do you want!?” I asked imperatively, trying to maintain a control over the situation. “Well, nothing in particular, just something I noticed while coming here” He spoke meticulously as he moved closer to my position. Slam!!! I could feel the tree’s hard surface on my back; he had slammed me, and now was holding me tightly against the tree. “You know what I mean, right?” He retorted in a maniacal manner, making direct eye contact; His eyes felt like snake slits inspecting my very soul; I tried my best to loosen the strong grip, but to no avail, his hands pressed my skin in a manner that it was impossible for me to make a viable break. “He can’t mean…..but how!?” I closed my eyes in utter shame, still feeling the strong grip of his arms forcing me against the tree. “Yes, it was pretty obvious; you are in love….. With another boy” He spat maniacally, laughing uncontrollably at my misery. After he had his merry laughs, I could only close my eyes in shame and disgust, anger and pain, it wasn’t just the fact that he was holding me against my will or that he knew my secret, it was more, the fact that I could never say it out loud was the thing that bothered me the most. “But Imagine, popular little Richard, such a strong secret could ruin your life forever, but don’t worry your little secret is safe with me….I just wanted to...” He stopped for a moment while his facial expressions returned to a calmer state, and his grip loosened, letting one of my arms free. “I just want to do this…” He looked at me directly, letting his face become closer to mine. A kiss…. He pressed his lips against mine slightly; they were very soft and almost succulent, and his mouth tasted like something calm and intoxicating almost like some concentrated nectar. I felt intoxicated from the taste, He had let his grip loose, now could be the time to escape. I maneuvered away from his grip and moved farther away from where he stood, placing myself in a position where if needed to I could run away, but I wanted answers. “Okay…okay…you love him, but if you do then maybe you should stop playing the part of the good little boy, and just accept it” He shrugged as he smirked sheepishly. “What, you come to school for two days and you think you know me!?” I spat angrily at the auburn haired kid in front of me, at that exact moment I didn’t know how to feel, and so I just ran, finally letting the tears flow. “Run….cry” the only two things my mind could dictate, the only two things I could will myself to do, running and running, slight tears falling. “heh…..Don’t cry so much….it’ll be over very soon”, Sinister thoughts crawled through an unfinished mind. I ran and ran, through each wall that looked identical to the next, each step felt like a drop down to hell, as my breath could barely hold out ,the for some reason excruciating task of running anymore. “Why does he know, sooner or later I would have to face it, but why so soon, it’s not fair….it’s not okay.”Leaning against a wall to rest made me realize my breathing was forcefully stopping, and my vision was getting blurry. “What’s, happening to me!?” To top things of, now it felt like I was going to die. “Ha…hah…..it’ll all be over soon, no need to worry about anything….” “I don’t want to feel like this!” I yelled brusquely with barely any strength to do so, it felt as if I really was dying; but I didn’t want to die here with so many things left unsaid. “Why is this happening to me!?” I whimpered falling to the ground with barely any air left to breathe. My vision was getting darker, and at this rate I would probably die for a reason I couldn’t understand, I would die under the now starry night. “At least there are stars tonight….”, I though as if to comfort myself to the idea of death. “Alphonse I….l-“I could no longer think, my vision was dark and it felt like every light had been erased….I would see no more light today….. Drip… My breathing feels heavy, my head hurts so much. Drip… I can’t see straight, I can barely hear anything. Rain…. “Help!” , I screamed in agony, as the drops of rain fell to the ground….a heavy rain, that wasn’t even roaring as it did so many times before as it fell. “Goodbye…..” My last thought as the rain fell slowly, no one would come to save me tonight, this was my entire fault, and I shouldn’t have heard what Faite had to say, not having to run away from everything. Drip… “It’s been fifteen minutes…” Just like that I could hear some heavy footsteps coming closer in my direction. “I leave you alone for a little while and you go get yourself lost!” The cocky grin, and the voice, even through my condition, I could recognize Alphonse’s voice. “You don’t look so good” He said remarking the obvious, but now with serious tone, but still keeping his prankster nature;I for some reason was feeling better, I thought I was going to die, and suddenly I felt like I actually wasn’t going to. The now muddy ground felt soft, under the dark sky, from which rain kept falling, slowly, almost as if a higher power made the rain slow it’s pace just for this moment. “Come on, I’m taking you to the hospital, you can’t go home looking half dead” He smirked; I only smiled slightly as a sick person does even when their energy is all drained. Like when children, by the hand, He lead, I followed, Nothing more, but he occasionally looked back with his cocky grin, and I smiled back, It may have been something like this that had shaken my emotions to the point of breakage, I wasn’t really sure what to call the feeling…but it was nice. “Just…like…children” I muttered slowly, almost without any strength behind the words. “Yeah, just like old times…” He said smiling, I wasn’t sure if he felt the same thing but it was a nice warm feeling. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “I hate the rain….” A sinister voice echoed through the dark rainy night. “Well…..I guess Destiny doesn’t play very fair with me” The last words were almost echoed as the sinister presence disappeared from the hill into the night.
well, unfortunately, it's not in the states...sorry, XD But it's the convention center...and that place is like the cream!. I can't wait to record!.
yay, i'm on the group....so then lets get to work. umm....who else is getting there songs recorded in a studio? oh man, i'm so excited....i will be performing at the biggest convention center around!!!. in two days. yay!!!!!!>.>
