Okay, so here's the deal After hearing "light up the darkness", that's what inspired me to the Idea. Thank god for Mass effect instrumentals. yup, that's J.D.'s music right? so what do you think good Idea or not?
Hey, I know this may sound stupid.... but to show our progress as a dedicated group, our first project.....just a silly idea but.... you know "simple and clean/hikari" well, maybe we can do that now, you might be thinking But that's such a "insert insult here", why would we do that? Well, I was thinking. The song can start like it normally does, very piano-like and sweet, and thats where the main vocalist can sing it, and after that it goes into (R&B style?)I dunno , and the vocalist keeps singing and stuff and then we add some rap part to hikari,(ghetto?) and thus we have hikari(Audio arts Remix) If it sounds lame you can let me know, but since this is KHV, it might just work.
Hey mike! Hope you've been doing allright. =)
Wow. I've never played football, but I guess it would be interesting, considering I think I can handle strong hits. Very intense only one problem....... I want more!!! XDD. please more, more.
What exactly is wrong with that? XDD I couldn't help but laugh when they kissed and went all rodeo on Azure flame XDD. hey! field trips!! games, special school occations......just thinking about it makes me so excited! Thank you so much for adding me to your story!
That is completely true, the less desperate you sound, the more interesting you do. So to sum things up, girls want a nice guy that acts like a man, one who is very decisive and accertive. One that thinks about them on the inside, but acts normal around them on the outside. Pretty demanding if you ask me XD.
You're a strong and cool girl. Don't let stupid comments get to you, if they bother you, destroy them. If they destroy you pulverize them. In all seriousness, I hope things get better for you.
Quoted for thruth. Maybe they just don't want to be too serious, or maybe they don't consider you serious, and maybe they think youre not the "right" one.
Very blunt and direct. I liked this chapter a lot, wait a sec... The locks sound like classes(no duh there) and the last three, very interesting. I'm just suprised there isn't any class that actually seems supportive >.> but since you don't care.....I won't even type anymore about details. I'll just go ahead and say, that this was a great story, and I understand that story wasn't the original intent for this and thus that may partly have to do with you uninterest.
XD very interesting indeed, omg, Cintrus. Repliku in religion class XD. Oh please write more, its so short, and I want to see more. Xephos X Cupkake?
Woah.....you added me into the story? I'm so happy!.....just a bit surprised....how did you actually...erm..nvm. Anyways aside from a few grammar and spelling errors, I say this is good. Since this story is meant to have lots of characters I say third person omniscient is the way to go. but, divide the dialouge like Cupkake said, and give this a bit more spacing and voila. Oh me being close to xephos was pretty accurate considering, i think we might make good friends IRL. *reps* keep it up. Edit: Maybe you should just use our username, since people who read this might not understand much just by reading names they don't know who they belong to, and use our full names when it may seem neccesary.
Very cliffhanger and short..... I'm gonna say.....a cliffhanger does not make better a stale start(not saying yours was, just clarifying )It was easy to read, and fun, now we need a second chapter to open this story up a bit more. Yes, today was a good day, both you and shades uploaded good stuff.
Why truly it is..... The Italian.....man was that hard to read.....>.> but a very ispiring work nonetheless. There's something special about this.....I can't put my finger on it. This style resembles somewhat the creators of animatrix.....<.<
Wow.....I never though someone would do this but it sounds like an RP....well yes seriously it would...hey mods can be teachers! And well,the rest is up to you....I want to read this out of curiosity. good luck. Edit: On a sidenote....maybe cupcake can help you write this, she's good with stories and it would help to have different pov's in respects to the writing.
Very funny. That grim adventures reference....priceless. but there's nothing related to the big bad wolf in here. A peanut missile.....lol.
Hmm.....well Hey!....i don't live that far away.....I live in the 51th state.....so it's not that far >.> to tell the thruth.....the convention center was.....soo big.....it was amazing...i have Pics of it....i think. Hmm!!!....maybe we could make a thread in the music section....just for uploads.....the music section isn't very visited so....it might go unnoticed..... So...i was thinking.....what kind of project can we make together?....>.> I know!.....Hippie can you post some of your original song lyrics? And then we can make some lyrics for your band!......or not. Oh.....i know how to do screamo......and my voice isn't getting hurt by it.....it took me a while to master....considering....my forte isn't rock......but i love alt. *gets shot* Oh...hippie your band needs a MS page, once you get more popular that is. I keep rambling on......J.D. you have any ideas?
Kind of the wrong place..... Giving money is a serious matter... So no , not really, too risky and the sum you want is exageratedly high.....i'm sure you could get something cheaper.
A feeling of emptyness? Hmm..... Perhaps you say everything is going fine, but you would want it to be better. Let's see.....maybe you want to be a more confident person....and you feel like that little bit is missing to help your life. Well, i'm not really sure....but that may be it.
This is completely right. This really is more a matter of choice, than a divine plan. We just try to blame everything on some divine entity that might or not exist....just because of OUR choices and occurences....just another way to run away from the truth, really.
Awww, Jiku....you'll be a critic? but you must write something.....atleast once. anyways.....i suck at writting...but i can write in english and spanish so whatever....i have somethings going for me....but they kinda suck. First: My first story (very bad) Tales of Alteria(yes tales the game) 1. The summoning prince(completed...needs working on) 2. The crimsom Archer(not done....not even in progress) 3. The Lone Adventurer(not written not worked on) Tales of Alteria is in spanish....and are mostly very short stories , the first one being only about 25-30 pages. The others might just be like that also and are very simple...and only for my personal entretainment. One last time This one is a one shot....in spanish but it may go farther if i do so desire it....it has only like 7 pages. Fate series 1.Fate(In progress....chapters posted here) 2. Destiny(In progress and soon to be posted here-prequel) 3.Untitled(In progress...just you wait) 4.(may or may not happen) The Fate series is a very badly written story....the plot is very Good...and should encompass some things. Fate and Destiny go hand in hand....Destiny being the prequel of Fate...and i plan on Posting chapter per chapter of each one depending on how i want people to understand the stories. You see i'm not a good writter in fact....i never intend to get anything published, these are very short and stuff. This is done out of personal satisfaction. BTW...if there's anyone who know's spanish i would apreciate if they checked my spanish story.
