Actually you are a better writer than I am, I could istantly notice it when I read "Vividity".
Well, thank you. This is my second story ever. Hopefully, I can actually finish this one.
Well, I mean, that happened to his uncles, meanwhile he wrote without knowing it happened? that's a bit confusing.
Hey there....check my latest writing, not as good as yours but....welp. Vermillion sunset
The ending left me all confused. It was an ankward story, but otherwise good...kinda pointless though. Though...I laughed a bit with the "I'm coming" part. xD
Indeed, plase try to lower the choppyness, it kills the story. But otherwise good.
It's very good, I just really can't say anything bad about it. Well, maybe that the characters are badass. Just that....Vampires are so cliched nowdays, it's really hard to appreciate a vampire story...Is the main a vampire also, because I thought he was human, but at the end it says that his thirst for blood killed her?
You have a fixation. This story shows me how you can dable between things. Take that as you will.....xD. Just kidding you know I always love your stories....and it's interesting...you evil schemer.
Like Persona 3!
well....that's why I said cliche. >.> I don't even watch host club but my friend does...Mr. Bun Bun.
Typical.....and cliche death...but that doesn't mean it's bad. Skittles is awesome in this story.
Let's hope so....as long as Drama is kept to a minimun >.> but you know how we all love drama! *shot*
But that doesn't mean things got easier has Kay's life would soon take a turn for the worst E true KHV story : Catch the Rain.
*Coughcoufhnecoughkucough* Lol, this is one of the nicest threads in the spam zone.
Ahhh.... That is a though situation.... Skittles, I know you love your father....And it hurts him because he would love to supply everything to his children. Something similar is happening here with the recession and all. One day I needed new sneakers for a volleyball game....and of course Asics™ was the way to go but they costed above the 100 dollars....and my fathers paycheck wasn't coming in a few days. So...as we left the store I looked at him and he told me he felt bad he couldn't get me the sneakers. I just told him (almost twiching) that it was okay because money was something secondary, and I wouldn't change my parents because They loved me and that was enough. Of course I died a bit inside for being corny....and I know love wont buy groceries...but it's more important. Try talking heart to heart to your dad...I'm sure it will make him feel a little better.
xD it's very good and also hilarious.... xD This is definately a whole new outlook on KH.....xD
It's kind of short...and a little bit gory. If you can keep progressing upon this Idea It could turn out Awesome.
Well, I just ended my year writing and getting drooled on by a dalmatian.... Life is good.....but it sucks
Bah, get over yourself. It will probably get better....or worse
What exactly happened with Neku anyways? Did his buttons get pushed too much or something?
