Don't worry....girls adore this type of story , it's nothing personal*pats back* xD. Anyways....when is the next chapter coming?
The dreamcast was advanced for it's time. many people din't really grab the concept of online and much less the one of a portable thing that can connect to the controller. Otherwise it was a pretty neat console.
She!?.....Well...that explains a lot O_O If God were to actually proofed to be real, all misconceptions would be put aside, but , imagine the pope saying "God's will is...." those terrified with the idea of God sending them to hell would unwillingly follow. And those agaisnt God would become an organized group to rebel, the goverments would issue persecussion against those who do not obey, leading to small conflicts around the world, not only that but if the papacy(being a multi-million dollar organization) were to supply our failing goverment money, they would gladly obey like a good dog. So, no the existance of God is best left questionable.
Hmm.....seems to me that this is a CoM related story. It's good so far, normally I wouldn't read fics, but this one is pretty good, fics should be long enough to be interesting and short enough not to be tedious; I think your fic did that. I suggest you keep writting it's good , short and sweet ^_^
Lulz!!!!! I must admit, I was a bit excited, I was like, "what's gonna happen!?" But then again.....You two in the house alone....just a kiss...phah! You just did that because the story is PG-13.....JK. And finally he said it xD, That was fast, a kiss already!?....man he goes for what he wants quick! xD. Good chapter....very good chapter.
Lol...my sister calls me her big teddy bear to hug xD. this last part was to describe the new characters, I want to see where this goes, mainly because it's cool story. keep it up, it's so good...now I wanna see what happens next!
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Lulz. That was actually very funny....I think I couldn't live with myself If I had to change in locker rooms...Luckyly....I don't have to, besides I couldn't live without playing volleyball in a team XD. I would like to play Football someday, they tell me I have the body to do it(though I don't feel that's a compliment....well isn't clear why?)....I prefer singing. Anyways, nice chapter xD. I just have one question.....well a couple. Spoiler Why is your boyfriend perfect? Did you really move? How did you meet your boyfriend IRL? Are you really on the same school!? Why is your story so cool?
I haven't read it, but you might want to separate some things; and also change the size of that font....it makes it harder to look at. Where's torchic!? Outrageous!!!!, he's the cutest! will he get a trainer?....you got all the starters and no torchic!
Very Original and greatly funny. I was laughing so much when the character's recognized the narrator, and even more so with the "Oh crap..." part. that was great, really not what I expected, but great nonetheless. As it turns out a prologue can turn into so many things.
Right, righhhhtttttt. I can't wait!, lately KHV has been giving birth to such good stories, it's hard to resist.
Here....It's not right to double post....not that it matters much. But it will get you of trouble.... And Since I want to see where this goes.
Xenosaga, Final Fantasy, Persona, Nippon Ichi games. not very good with action games. >.>
Updated Chapter 2 is up, kinda a boring chapter, but there have to be passive chapters before anything active happens; and an added bonus I got to actually place an imperfect character in my story...not sure if it was a wise move, but I wanted to try it out at least once. Anyways, enjoy. I'll try to upload chapter 3 today also, just so it doesn't feel as boring >.> Can't wait to make the next chapters(especially chapter 4) Updated chapter 3 is up, sorry it took so long, I hope it feels bit more emotional. As you can see That's only part one. the next part I'll upload soon hopefully. Don't worry it will get more interesting as time goes by.
I'm fine, but it really isn't my place, it's Destined's forum. Loverboy....that name as a certain ring to it. and no, I'm not Destined, my...
I know!!!! *squeals* I'm like you, though the math teacher is the devil's match, I was doing really bad so the night before I asked someone to explain(not a super hot person with dating potential mind you) and I did good on my test. Anyways...wait a sec....shouldn't that little hug raise a little suspicion? I mean, unless the live in a world where people are open minded..... so, what do the other people do or think in the story, ect?
Hello, Nice to meet you too =). Is there something you wanted? Just ask away. Btw....your account is set not to receive PM's did you know?
Oh, okay, I though he was the boyfriend at the time. Thanks for clarifying.
It's a pretty Bland place, that's why I sent invites. Soon, it should have a lot of writers sharing works, ect.
I noticed you're not being specific, but thank you anyways...I think this writing style is a bit easier.
