Okay, then I'm commenting. I seriously thought you didn't want people to break and divide your poems. The last one I could understand....barely >.> "Poets talk so much, and yet say so little" I did make a poem like this once, though not as long. I do wish you could give a little description. Atleast for those of us who have a bit of a hard time understanding. you know, "The three of the hanged" that's very....unusual. Can you still make "cute" and simple poems? I ask this because most adults forget how....I think this is because we forget the feeling....of being younger. Maybe if we retain that feeling or do something to remind us of it...
that's a relief. I thought you stopped writing. Good. I want to see where this goes.
I wonder what you'll do next with this story.... Each character...You've yet to present a goal, a main purpose....can't say that's a bad thing, though.
Well, the thing is, remember not to make a fool of yourself. Imagine you actually asking the question and the guy freaks out because he's straight. There have to be some sort of signs, if you see him again, try to observe his body language and his mannerisms, I'm sure you don't wanna go through that kind of embarassment.
I do feel bad for the nurses that died....and the children, those were some brave nurses. but it would be really interesting to know his motives. Its something I cannot comprehend.
Well, I've never seen swing dancing, but tango, I've seen a lot....and salsa and merengue and all that stuff.....>.>, its not that complicated.
Well, I made a poem of love....maybe I could post it some time around. I'll try to post it since I've been pretty busy, bit wanna get back.
those are beautiful. Now I have to see this movie, it looks interesting. the 14th one looks a bit grainy, but overall this is really beautiful.
yeah, pretty much so. I've heard this song a lot recently and its one of the best I've heard around. And the music video is pretty cool too. This song left me a bit impressed, I never though it mentioned God.
Update I united Start by the end chapter, and only divided it by two parts...so basically part 1 is part 1 & 2 together and the now part two is actually the conclusion of chapter 3 . Sorry, I haven't been able to write much. I have been busy with school and real life business. but hopefully I can write chapter 4 soon. I don't know if a howl is "wauu" so excuse me for that XD.
We know the beating was a bit unecessary, but in the end it was the right thing. Besides, he probably won't press charges seeing as if he does, he will go to jail when they discover exactly how he got so bruiced. Yeah, most normal girls can kick ass...believe it or not . Girls are hard hitters.
Wow, This is so beautiful its sheer simplicity is a beauty in itself. Its such a simple poem, but I think it depicted so much. I enjoyed the small moment I read it. Just goes to show, there's no need for fancy wording to make a heartwarming poem.
People are People. Once they decide to close their mind even the most intellectual is a fool. Its truly deplorable that people hurt and segregate each other over their religious belief, its not fair to anyone. An the worst of it all, is the fact that those close-minded minorities are what people will classify the whole group as. I'm saying this both for theists and atheists. people refuse things because they are afraid that what they have incorporated in their lifes as thruth and definite can be revealed to not be what everyone expected.
Or you could also stick a broom up his ass, that can also keep him straight and narrow. xD No, but seriously, if he gets too violent and you wish to escape with pride, try and get him into a position where you actually stand up for yourself and an adult catches him before he does any harm. Not the most secure option, but these day and age teens seem to think the strongest can get away with anything........Isn't obvious that the law will screw them eventually?
Now that's a sexist comment, besides Holden isn't as badass as Aria, she seems to fit the part of hero just fine. Now she should start butt-whopping.
Well, you know I wouldn't wish anyone your current situation to anyone. Lets start from the beggining. You don't trust anyone, because they have butchered the trust you placed in them, but in the end no one is asking you to trust them with your life or your secrets as they will most likely do the same thing, you don't need to trust them with your life, just be friendly. chances are that when you present yourself to be friendly , they will most likely see you as an actual friend. One other thing I must tell you. You can't expect the world to make a U turn to make you feel happy. It just won't. The lifes filled with movie fantasies are not real, and that sucks; but its also no reason to reject the struggles the world has burdened you with. A very special friend once told me: "We are like fish, sometimes we go with a group, but eventually we sometimes go alone and onto the next group..." At first I rejected this; I wanted friends to be with me forever and not separate each other. I wanted to have my friends be more than just classmates. But that didn't work out at all; and being depressive and by myself either. I just did what I wanted. I made a change. No magical new-kid or popular kind kid will come out of nowhere to take you out of the stagnant cycle of monotonous school days. I was responsible for finding happiness. I couldn't just stay put with the fact that my life was unfair or not all it was knocked out to be. I would just have to pursuit the things I wanted on a different outlook. As for being that special someone....Who knows maybe you already are, but haven't realized it yet. But it still boils down to the same thing. I know life isn't as its knocked out to be, but there's really nothing we can do about that but submit it to our desires. I'm sorry if I'm not being helpful at all.
Oh, please...Kay is a strong girl, and you're just making me worry even more. Besides we can survive(barely) alone, so Kay can take a break. Don't worry Kay, we will try not to blow the site up while you're gone, though its tempting xD.
Okay, it seemed pretty predictable, but then the last sentence....it has me curious. I actually read it a while back, but forgot to comment.
You know it would help you a lot more, if ABC family wasn't running BOTH "cinderella story" movies. I'm sorry but this sounds exactly like that; and when I mean exactly, the speaker thing....that isn't very original, though I'm enjoying how you've improved in writing. But for originality....thats another story.
So, in reality, this thread was made to get a guy's attention? >.> Well, I'm sure we can understand that! *laughs*
