Hey, you'll be fine. You always are.
That's a nice story you have there.
Update This chapter was a bit long, and its my first time writing battles. Just again, point out anything if you see it. Enjoy. From this point the font of the title will change, it will keep changing as I see fit, and it works as a good divider from phases, too.
The battle parts are not bad, so I really don't see any need to change them, as you said. I've never really done battle parts, so I don't know how hard they can be, but I'd say yours are clearer than most.
This was really fun to read. It was fluid, though work a bit more on the description of the battle parts, which were very well writen, but could be a bit more clearer....just a bit. I thought this was really good. better than what I write. It was truly enjoyable for me.
Well, I believe we are constantly growing as our perception collides with those of others and the world, just some changes are more notticeable...
Growing a beard? Well, there's no rush, but beards do make a person look more mature.
I'm a male, and to tell you the thruth...In here people confuse me for a girl, but in real life they might think i'm some sort of bouncer or...
Probably, not, but it certainly doesn't lack the power to have one, in fact if something happens, maybe economy falls or something, the church could take advantage and spread its roots into the goverment once more.
Well, yeah, but I didn't think you'd be so direct. Can't say that's a bad thing though, its actually very flattering of you XD. you caught me so...
It was wrong. But atleast the family is better off without the church. Unfortunately rules are rules, even when I think this case was the exception of the rule. As I said, they are better off.
Oh!....ehh..ehh...Thanks, that kinda caught me of guard.
Hey, that's mean, Even if is true. Rainbow monkey, of course there are other people who suffer the same or more. so in a way you're not alone.
Thanks, for adding me to your friends list.
Just keep in mind that too much beer can be harmful. and remember to pack all the neccesary things such as toothbrush and underwear. and well....remember protection >.> *shot*
Thanks for the rep. Its scarce to see pretty girls who actually hold onto their common sense. ^_^
Well, just one thing: This might happen again. Don't worry, life is like that. but hopefully you'll be able to deal with it better. Try and demostrate through actions that you really are concerned about school and college.
Hey. you're back. I was wondering when you would return. Is your mother against online interaction?
Yeah, I guess you have. but its not going anywhere so you can take your sweet time XD.
Hey, what's up?