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Well...yeah...the master sword, it was even clearer when he didn't have the sword, even when in battle stance. that looks neat. not that I'm much of a zelda fan, but meh.
Seriously....is there something religious groups won't protest? Sure...it's hell, but no one protested when Folkore came out(they better not) It is a game and for the target audience it is aimed...I think teens understand that it's just a video game adaption, not some satanic-soul sucking-Quija board of doom. This...like always is overated.
Wow...this thread was disturbing up 'till page 8 or so...it needs more something.... Well returning to the subject(after ages) Being witness to a library masturbation....those poor books never stood a chance.
I wonder if it's P2p...probably so...I mean, it shouldn't be...
Eh? Golden sun DS, where? If that's true then I must get a DS now....and a PS3...*sigh*
Oh, sorry...I forgot to give critique...You know I read most stories at the creativity corner, but I don't know how to critique correctly. I think it wasn't bland, it's a prologue so...it's not required much. I though it was a bit short, though, but once again, it's a prologue...so I can't really say much on it. This is merely a start, so it's best to wait and see how it develops.
Guys...I'm afraid I'm gonna have to ask you to cool it. Jiku is giving her critique on this. I don't know anything of the signature, but as far as the posts are concerned, it is constructive criticism. And when it means lonesome, it means it's not Fan-fic related. I know this is original, but it's still a fan-fic. Don't worry it can easily be moved. This is Critique. I know, sometimes it's a bit severe, but everyone gets it...only absorb what you may find useful to improve, it's no biggie.
I was to say the same thing. And, yes people feel bad by lacking purpose, but in truth it's pointless to think of it, as you said. Or death would become our inminent option, and that's a big no, no.
Well....this is a very strange Fan-fic. The characters don't seem like their normal selves, and yet it fits them, in a way. In fact I could almost imagine Demyx bing friends with lexaeus...This fan fiction is very good, and for some reason I'm always enjoying reading from you, it feels so fluid to read and comprehend. Now I just feel bad for the organization members, and the fact that they never cared to expand on if sora was right in erasing them.
No need. I know that you didn't do anything bad. I'm just saying that sometimes it's better to back down, even when you're not at fault.
Well...One simple action done can create ripples. It's not about being important to history, but creating bonds that remain...even when all is gone..your life would have been yours, it's about living happy and making others happy. Being a leaf blown in the wind, that's what we all are....there's not much we can change, but what we can, we do. I think this one is a bit corny, but it serves as an answer, no?
Oh, it won't. I am not fond of those. My oblivion...don't worry, just accept your mistakes as something simple.The more Hype placed on them, the more arguments arise. 8)
Okay, okay...Oh, but that's my creativity at work....It's created, but I don't know who did, though.
Fix'd,....no need to thank me :) EDIT: Woah...Atlas, you okay? You seem a big....err, I mean mad. My oblivion just admit it was grammar problems...
Oh, wow....A sword that cuts through all evil, and wimen....and men
Well...It seems the RPG's are in low supply, but atleast there's white knight chronicles, and FF13 So...not all is bad for RPG.
Claru was now in the small hut, which was given to him, for him to stay the rest of his days like common folk. He felt some guilt over leaving it, seeing as he had gotten used to the small structure. He tydied everything as best as he could, grabbing a small bag filled with important items and such...first he needed to obtain a staff that could give him the upper hand in the workings of mana spirits, and what better one than the mystical "mana staff" this was his best bet. The royal family of taniska knew of the temple where the staff was kept hidden; a small man-made shrine in the outskirts of pandora. he would stop at pandora and gather some supplies, from there he would go to the shrine and obtain the mana staff. His immediate goals were set, once he was ready he closed the hut thightly, and without looking back he began his walk towards pandora. OOC: btw....The last rule doesn't make sense at all..If I remember correctly, only some people could use magic and/or mana spirits. But, then again...I understand where this is going too. But, not all are able to use spirits now, are they? Well...I have no problem with that either way, so...
Oh, really? I always thought it was more "We'll screw you 'till the very end". Who knows, those homeworks could be a deciding factor.
It's allright has long as it's only allusions to it....that's the beauty of the word "close" But, then again...this is a children's site. Allthough pika power thinks we should have a pornography section!? Wth?
