Well, she doesn't really bring anything new to the table with her voice, but the song there is truthfully wacky(tells something real, but does it in a nice beat). I don't think there seems to be anything special about her, but her "foundations" song is pretty nice. And the beats are pretty catchy. That's pretty cool.
Well...This might be in the wrong sub-section...aside from that, this is very strange, at least to me. It seems...so, well I can't find an exact word for it. Either way, I find this being way out of my league...I can relate to its message, somewhat, but it still eludes me.
Bad Rayku. You know bumping is wrong. Here's my CnC: The fact that we get don't get any information about the boyfriend being an abuser after she actually says it to another person isn't very good, this means that you aren't giving enough info in the narrative, this does not mean info -dump which is basically dumping the info. You throw us into the situation, and we never know how bad he is to her, even when the narrator(herself) could easily tell us this. The same thing applies to Matt being of a powerful family. She could atleast make allusions to it in her narrating, because she is his girlfriend after all. There are some spelling & Grammar issues too, so try to check those out 'cause there are quite a few. And so...this story will be told from two different perspectives you should show their personalities through narrative, also.
Hello.Is something the matter? Or just saying hi?
Don't worry. He/she better be joking. Your stories are amongst the best,even the serious ones. It's not like everything has to be humor.
Yes, you're right, but it is classified as an Action/RPG. It's not too far off from the initial request...and I think the game's atmosphere is pretty thrilling.
The GBA slot replacement is a huge turnoff. I have the golden sun games & my FFTA...and lots of other gba games I would like to play, but haven't had the chance due to my SP breaking...now, I was gonna buy a DS Lite, but Iheard there are going to be DSi exclusive games....And that makes me wonder. I just hope that the exclusive DSi games are just picture taking games(which would make sense) and not anything major.
Well...there's folklore...exactly what you're looking for. Valkiria Chronicles isn't exactly an RPG, but it's strategy and real-time action. And there's also others that are action, but could fit the mold...such as Prince of persia, eternal sonata...ect.
Omg....that was great...Now I know what to expect in XIII.
Oh, well...I was just, you know wondering. Since it's not like you see the person. I guess eventually you can get a chance to. So it's love conversations through instant message? I think I got it.
Basically 400 dollars. BTW what do you mean by saves? If you mean the Memory card ones, I could just buy the adapter(since I don't have that much PS2 games). Most of the time I can't stand console overload, it becomes cluterred. And I think the gamestop deal seems pretty good...I hear the PS3's 60 gig are rare to find. Thanks for the imput.
How do online relationship happen, though? I've never understood. *shot*
Wow....that was sort of unexpected. Good luck, and all that jazz.
I think the church wouldn't get involved...but the goverment should allow gay legal marriages, so then they would have the same rights a married couple should, and avoid monetary and/or Property issues in case of separation. I mean....you don't have to marry in a church to happy. I just don't think that public demostrations in front of children should be wise, because I think in the future nothing should affect their choice of partner. You know, that's just my view, but I think it's more a parents responsability to teach their kids about Homosexualism and Lesbianism. That would avoid any problems in the future because it's better to give the children a broader understanding. Since the church tries to guide itself from bibles...I don't think that should change, but the goverment should.
Ahhh....Well hopefully you don't get caught. Hope you can survive for a week without internet! Btw, thanks for everything.
Well...I must say this IS better than all that you've written. It's nice and all, but it somehow lacks a bit in style, in which case can be overlooked since you're just beggining. I'm somehow thinking the last sentence could have been played out better, instead of saying in one sentence everything that happens between them... Then again the former is more something out of personal opinion...so that isn't something you need to change. Overall this is good...what matters now is where you can take it.
Darn. This is too good. You seem to be out of any writer's block,while I'm just a blockhead at the moment. I can't begin to express how beautifully written this piece was, it is certainly a treat to see something like this in the creativity corner. I'm glad you're back.
Well...It would be better to wound & interrogate, but I doubt I'd even have the ability to do something like that. I mean, guns aren't that easy to handle. I'd just probably kill him, get his cell-phone and start getting some answers....And then fight the mafia scum thst sent a killer after me, or something.
Then, thank you. I gladly accept your kindness. I know I'm not the best so only through others integrating and imparting things to me, which will...
You know....it's not an obligation, and please don't feel like it is, because of my current condition. I don't want to impose you with uneccesary...
