I'm a poll!!!! Btw, everyone I'm Breakeven. I just went back to my original name when I was a new member. Vote for me? Ugh...I dunno. I don't wanna go against Jiku or Obsessed.
This poem, is simple, but nice. Nothing out of this wold, but great nonetheless. At first it reminded me of Wolf's Rain ending sequence, but then it turned darker the poor wolf escaping the humans. I also enjoy the rhyme. Good job.
Not the best work ever, but it's good. You should continue creating poetry. One thing that bugs me is the abnormal size of the font, letters this big repel people away. I would suggest that you re-size it, so that many people can enjoy your poetry work (^_^)
I've told my real life friends about your story, if that's any consolation. This reminds me somewhat of Fullmetal Alchemist(the anime) in some parts. And well, every shonen that has an organization of military, and/or a weapon that can be unleashed. Heck, I always put in a good word for you, even when you sometimes reply with such moody replies. Though, your making something very original, it's not always you see a story that can be imagined as an anime so easily. You always put yourself and your work down, and that's not being realist, it's being a pessimist. You really need to re-define the line that divides professionalism and us normal folk, 'cause it seems to me you could publish a book, in your current state. I'd certainly buy it. Sure, there's always someone who's better, but time doesn't allow us to be perfect, so don't put the things you do so much on the ground, your works don't deserve such diminutive treatment.
I believe this was suggested before. But aside from using it to pay in the graphic shop...what else would we use it for? I really see no point, unless there was something that the website provided us to pay for. And no....I don't wanna pay currency for my name changes, not for anything, actually, since there's nothing cool....unless a team of artists worked for the site and gave it cool things we could buy and/or sell. Otherwise...I see really no point in a currency system other than the illegal trafficking of it >.>, if that's even possible xD But on a more important note...No one would benefit from currency, not even the artists, because they wouldn't need to spend it on anything. And if this system was implanted, I believe a bank should also be placed, so that we could open accounts for our currency, or simply open accounts for a social groups(Gentlemen, Z team...and any other)
Advent./.....there's sexual content in TGA's thread of lifestream in spamzone. Check last post.
I don't think there's anything. I'm pretty much not famous for anything. Wait....Styx aren't you a g-*shot*
I'd go with Toonami, if it was back in the old days, when it had good things in it. Now Cartoon Network failed when they started removing anime and other good shows it had. I'll go with adult swim, merely for the fact that they serve good anime. There's robot chicken too, which is awesome. There are some shows that I don't get at all, but the anime makes up for that.
This is interesting and very well written. I think that you should try to decorate your narrative with different words, stronger ones that can keep up with the magnificence that is the place described. I think overall, the paragraphs could use less lavish, but stronger one. As I said, it's written very nicely, but at some point, some sentences seemed stretched farther than they should because of the lavish prose woven into it.
I finally got around to reading this, and I must say that these chapters were really good. More is needed. This is too amazing, if not a bit cliche. Though, I think it's executed in near perfection. Now I wonder what will happen...though, this reminds me of an anime, a very popular one.
I agree with Obsessed. The faces are way too big, and wolf seems a bit out of proportion. It looks like you can draw pretty well. I'm just curious...where can I get a notebook that has a cartoon in it like that!? Pretty decent job, just continue writing....please?
Thank you...pure gold, eh? I like the sound of that. Anyways here is another poem that I wrote before those other two, it's not as good as them, but it was mainly to vent, and blow my feelings into a poem. I think it worked...better than I expected. mY LoSt SaNiTy Spoiler Look at me, tell me what you see Dark pools of truth? Or the crimson lust inside of me? I'm afraid that yesterday's gone And I plunge further with the clock My play of white curtains stained red with the sins of my soul Don't leave me tonight Facing demons alone It's the last prayer that falls from my lips Please don't let me go I've torn my resolve Halted the God's will now my human courage Is a ghost filled of deceit Plunged as I may be I yearn, even when my sins are writ With blood and guilt the last of my self-purity has wore thin Don't leave me tonight The silent seekers are scratching at my walls Hold me tight to your heart Hold me with the dreams of warmth A Candle lit in the dark Embrace that bathes in light the battling resolve of my self Maybe tomorrow, the angels won't pass my penitence...
I'm still thinking wether to enjoy your poems because they are so intricately woven, or just pox them for wrecking my mind. Nah...I'm joking, with these poems I have to think, and that's always a good thing. I enjoyed them all, but the last one had a nice flow it ends with said flow, is amazing. I know I take my sweet time to reply, though...sorry for that.
It's good to see you're determined, hopefully you'll see this to the end. One thing I'd recommend is for you to read stories here, so that you can get a feel for the art of writing. I agree whole-heartedly with all that the others said. this has much more dialogue, than it does monologue. Monologue is as equal important- if not more than dialogue. With it one can familiarize with the character down to the senses, the feelings and their internal thoughts. For a beginner you're pretty good, so keep it up.
But...Layers are so much fun and socially presentable, wouldn't you think so too, Styx?
Popularity? I myself think gattai should calm down. I know what he means, but calling other member's drawings mediocre? The only mediocre thing here is his attitude. You can draw better than them? Good for you, gattai, but don't go making a big fuzz and insulting other member's work. It's just something fun to do every year, nothing to get worked off about. If you weren't nominated, then it's not such a big deal.
This is rather interesting. It's new that you're taking the point of view from a bird. This was crafted very nicely, as we can see the pride the magpie has for his race. I found this rather sad, but who knows if this is a new beginning for the poor bird?
This poem is pretty simple, and yet it's very good. I find that last part extremely twisted. I like the flow and enjoy it quite a bit. Nice going there.
I wish. The fact is, this main character is pretty weird. I'd thought I would make a character at least similar to me(subconsciously), but for...
What are you doing? Because if it's butt-kissing, it won't get you anywhere. And neither will becoming premium if you're still acting like a jerk. I advice you stop this, {Place gender here} is just making a thread...if you don't like, then don't post, instead of unnecessary bashing that could lead to a storms. Would you kindly?
