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My first parner refused....Silly Billy is taking her place.

thank you!

Well...in the poetry tennis thread my partner refused to go into it, and I need one. I just need you to do poetry with me.

Help me!!!!Please?

Jiku Neon.

The last pieces

Awoken from a fantasy,
to find the shards of my broken dream.
this last memory that fails to recognize,
the frailty of this poor human being.

Where a heart cannot connect.
When the darkness is named the overtaker.
These pieces are fragmented,
and nevermore to be recollected.

Nothingness is my destiny,
but don't awaken the sleeping.
For their chains crackle warily
Do not awaken this sentiment of frailty.

Okay...I'll get someone, just finish your round, peacefully. (6th round is last, correct?) I'll have someone right now.

What? How do you expect people to partake if you don't set the stage for them? I think you should take names and set them up randomly, and inform...

I'd like to partake in a tennis round. Will that be okay?

Comparing your past works with what you have now...it's a great improvement. I'm liking that your expanding your unique style in a good manner.

One thing I noticed was that the sigs lack flow, or blending, also, some of the stocks look too small. Try to blend the stock with the background, follow this with the text, too. As for the flow, try to add the effects in a direction that complement the stock's position.

It's good that you're improving, so far you're doing great, but practice makes perfect.

I partly agree with this. I despise how they handled the dressphere in actual battle. If summons were included, then the system could have been expanded on by what each summon would require. The sphere grid v.s. Job system...I do agree that the grid was more open, it left many options, but the job system wasn't bad, either. Aside from the sailor-esque dress changes...the battle system in X-2 was better. Plus- the overdrives were replaced by the girls changing into another clothes alteration, after using every dress mid-battle...I despised that, and changing clothes during battle, too. Not because of the scenes, but due to the lack of strategy in this method. Instead of giving you a full-arsenal of characters(tidus,seymour are available in the international version) they just give you three characters that are basically the same.

Wut?

How can what you just said there be justified? The FFX battle system was not as good as X-2, since the first one didn't have options between active or passive. If you're referring to the dressphere changing in the middle of battle, then yes, but aside from that X-2 was better, in my opinion.

This game was good, decent, but not enough to stand as anything other than fan-service. I enjoyed the battle system, and the job system, too. The most complaints I had was mainly because at most points they send you to do nothing but side-quests, afterwards I had no idea how to progress. The dressphere was just plain bad. The idea was good, but the playing dress-up part....was not.

The lack of male characters kinda ruined some of it. FFX-2:GNO

Well, at least I'm not alone on that respect. I find it hard, too. To be honest, you're pretty decent if you're making this so fast. You can only go up from here...so, yeah, let's keep trying.

Click <<< This needs to be in the main section of CC, not in OW

Probably, the pun should go in Italic. In the end the main concern is the impact the writer wants to give and what he truly wishes to convey...I think.

Precisely. And then, at 18 they shrink into nothing. It's fairly simple.

That's good. Guys I'll be one of the judges this contest, so I hope you do your best. I'll be inspecting everything, making sure only the best is selected.

Of course, the main idea is to exercise writing abilities, so don't fret if your story isn't 10/10.

just have fun~

Yes, she actually read it. I'm glad some saw it, too. I thought this would be forever forgotten.

You noticed the capitals part xD Thanks for commenting.