It seems like things are starting to rail up towards the ending. I'm now waiting to see how this unfolds. Overall, the vocabulary in chapter 6 was better, if only a little bit; I know how hard it is trying to re-produce a chapter with lavish words. Good job so far.
update Chapter 9 is up! Be sure to read. I'm still taking my sweet time updating, but it's school that gains priority. A/N: Guys, the first part of Vermillion is nearing it's end. I may just create a small profile for extras, and characters such as Maxwell and Amanda. They seemed to appear scarcely. A shame really; they have a backstory, just not very developed. I still have an unused idea to give them exposure, even if they are dead.
Any of those is fine, as long as it's not really hard to create lyrics for. I haven't heard much House, but I'll leave the decision on what kind to you. I really don't mind. I'm sure you'll do something good.
Yeah, I am too. They're probably gonna come up with something good.
Yes. I think that's how it goes...I think that there should be a thread that accumulates The best poems made and the contest winners. But, that is...
Nah, I must thank you for being so awesome and accepting. I truly had no idea if you did poetry or not. I certainly was surprised to see how good...
Yah. It's a pretty nice idea.
Wow...just, wow. You've outdone yourself; the last part was amazing!
It's your turn to finish the poem. You did great so far. Thanks for being my partner.
Thank you, I've been meaning to find new brushes and what not. I'm starting on photoshop now, so I'd need all the resources I can get. Thanks again.
Last pieces(part 5) And, onto this dreams, I say "cursed be the luck of dreams" for delusional extremities have bound us all. And onto the end, we move forward This last moment, forever forward. For these pieces, broken they be. Never mended, destroyed they be. The sight must open, and awake we must be. 'Tis too late for waking. Those are already awake. Waiting for a redemption. Asking for the time of day. Open your eyes, into the dawn. For once this ends, no turning back again.
Encountered MSN troubles...I'll try to re-connect, sorry.
Can you make me custom music? Title: N/A Genre: Anything, as long as it's not rap, techno or hip-hop, country or stuff. I can't really work with those. Additional Details/Requests: I want you top create custom music. I myself don't know how to do this, of course in the computer, I mean. You'd make the music, and I'd make the lyrics and sing it, you know, the usual. Can this be done?
But...fine. I guess I'll just have to wait. But, seriously, don't disappoint. And well, the past song lyrics, while funny, seem outdated. No worries, thought. You guys will do great, I'm sure.
Well, I know what you're doing, but I don't quite understand it. Could you explain it a bit better. How does one change a song like that? Will the lyrics remain the same? What instruments will be used? I want to know, if possible.
Lol. It's all I can say. Your poems are so refreshing, they don't really have any ulterior meaning, but still keep the reader going. That's really good. Pinches...do guppies look like those? I'm not sure, but the word pinches sounds cute, at least when you're referring to the guppies.
Last pieces(part 3) Lies that cannot mend. truths that are at their end. Pieces are scattered too far away, waiting for a future that they wanted spent. The fate of these pieces, cursed it be, for memories scattered do nothing but fleet. Do not awaken the sleeping, for their hearts weight heavily. Do not waken the carnage and misery.
Yes, that is the case. I'm afraid I kinda added her thinking she might want to, but ended up not wanting to.
Ehm...check the poetry"tennis" thread and follow the rules there. Basically just continue the poem.
These are better than what I can do at Photoshop. I think that maybe the text isn't placed all that great. I like the smudging effects in the first one, and in the third one I enjoy how you tried to blend the stock, and yet it seems like it needs more blending, and more effects. Overall, you're doing great for starting at Photoshop.
