I think this was good, except...the battle felt a little downplayed. My opinion is that it should have been longer. I understand that this was realistic, but it seems that most of the time Tifa is just playing the damsel in distress or just plain being abused and hurt way too easily. In advent children she isn't that vulnerable. Another thing I noticed is that you mention Tifa left her friends and everything because she felt empty. How exactly does she rid herself of that feeling throughout the story? was it because of Aerith? I'm comparing this to Advent Children, because it's kinda like that, in regards to AC being focused on Cloud moving on, and this one about Tifa moving on. But somehow this doesn't retain that much feeling due to some parts being a tad too rushed. I made this for your story. Hope you'll like it. I saw this picture of Tifa and it jumped at me. The buster sword on the other side represents her bonds and friendships. And well...Tifa, since the story focuses on her. Note how the font is the same as the FF one.
It's no big deal. I've only seen you around a bit, so I don't really know you much, but it was nice meeting you.
Yeah, me too...not. I'm very tired. I partake in most school activities, and as if that wasn't enough, our senior class directive does not do squat, so only the diligent members and me(which should just sit on my behind) Have to do all the work. Add to that the drama, and homework and projects and deciding my future... Other than that, I'm dandy. ^_^ *collapses*/Attention hog
Thanks, guys. I'm like, so excited that misty would use something I made, since I'm pretty much a noob at this. But, I'm glad to be receiving such nice compliments. Thanks again, guys.
To be honest...no, it is not. But, then again, I just like the username is all.
Of course you may. And yes, the text shouldn't have been blended like that, I just blended it at the last minute, so it came like that. So anyways, You may use the Roxas colored one.
New siggies. I don't like them all that much, but I was mainly experimenting with textures and what not. V1 V2 This one is another story, and well...I know the canvas could have/should have been bigger, but I was mainly testing smudging and trying to get acquainted more with Photoshop. Heavenly CnC? Please, I really, really need advice and critique.
Gah....poor Styx. No wonder it wasn't on for a long time. Tell it that we are waiting for it to return, and that we need it's poetry! Send it my best wishes, too. <3 Att. Chevalier
I like how it kinda looks like a foggy glass. It has a good light source and I think the stock colors are complimented greatly by the line of light(which I think is a C4D) I don't really like the white splatters all that much, and the text feels a bit too plain, in my opinion. As a side note: This one looks almost exactly like the other one, style-wise.
Hmm.... Dear, the problem with this is that the clipped images are choppy, and too small. They are also low quality and blurry; I can't make out who those characters are. My guess is that you wanted to show Namine and Roxas encountering each other. There are many tutorials on how to render images using Photoshop, so I suggest you use those. As for the eye, it just looks like you painted it, and it doesn't look like you used different layers for each color, either. There's also the gradient tool, which could have helped you with this. It's pretty clear that you're starting with this, and well...I'd suggest starting with very simple/beginners tutorials. It's all about practice and experimenting with the tools and just about everything.
As I've mentioned to you before, your poems are very strongly driven by feelings. This one, to me felt of a fast pace. I'm liking it. I've always thought your works strong and delivering, so it's no surprise that this one is of that nature too. I'm liking the simile in this.
Beezygee- My favorite one out of these, I like the effects and all. Naoya- While I've already seem most of these effects played out in my own sig, it still looks nice, where it not for the brightness it might win. Hayabusa- Had to pick 3, but this one is pretty decent.
I sort of freaked a bit. I kept reading it, and as I read I felt pulled into the girl's frenzy, her doubts, her everything. I like how this flows so perfectly, and the macabre undertones of a ruined life send chills to my bones. This is, by far, one of your best works yet. It just seems so amazing, and though it's long it felt very pleasing to read. Kudos to you for this amazing poem.
Well, I'm pretty much on the same boat. There's not much to do.
Hello. What's up?
I think the first one is the only one that's decent. The others aren't very good looking. One thing I must say is that the Text and pen tooling are really good. The edges of the render look bad, you should add a jittery smudge effect to the parts that look choppy, in order to add a small "fading away" effect, and at the same time creating more depth and blending. There should also be a light source, which could greatly improve this.
Thought it was from "Jennifer's body". But, it is very misleading.
Oh, hey. How are you?
What does Sci-fi entail? Can I use an anime? Or does it have to be something related to space? I'm not too clear on this. >.>
I'm not digging the white/grayish brushing done on the right side. It seems too strong, leaving the stock with too much light. Try some strange smudging, and remove a bit of the "cloud"effect you're trying to give. The text placement...it's a bit too plain, but that's mainly my opinion on it. Overall, this is good.
