Okay, maybe not a sig, but I guess it counts as Photomanip, but I still used a render. I wanted to capture an aquatic feel, and the light. It has some mistakes, but.... CnC?
Sure, go ahead. I don't really mind people using the tags I make, unless I'm using them for myself. And yes, I was going for a really simple look.
Below the belt....but since we are confessing....IM RESONIC!!!!!!11!!111! Nah, I mean, me? the worst I've done is go invisible not to be disturbed. I'm such a naughty boy. :lolface: I feel like such a goodie goodie V_V
The problem is not the book at all. If we take into consideration the true nature of twilight, then we can conclude that it's just a book that falls under the average YA fiction book. (Or below average...whatever suits.) The problem is the people, they've been blowing things out of proportion, up to the point where no reasoning can pass through. If you read most of the attacks, then you'll realize that most of the people in the site do have the book, but they don't idolize it or attack people due to their (in most cases) sensible opinion. I mean seriously, ninja stars? Slitting of throats? Over a YA fiction book? Unfortunately, that's not the only problem. The idolization of twilight has more or less made the average american teen girl demographic stand still in regards to literature. They read Twilight, and then don't go for the higher works of literature. That is indeed unfortunate.
This is quite interesting, actually. I liked how it seemed informative on one part, and prose driven the next. It's like a person trying to tell a spooky story, but breaking away from the creepiness to deliver important facts. I think you should work on your spelling, most are typos, but it would be nice if they weren't there. Another thing was how you mention the mental damage that Josh receives up to the point that he still sleeps with a light turned on. That was very thoughtful, since most scary stories just end at escaping the baddie, but they never explain how messed up a person was left after the ordeal.
My horrid attempt at getting to do normal tags. I was trying stuff such as smudging, messed around with the settings. I feel like I'm not improving in Photoshop at all. V1 V2 Plus, I'm not sure I smudged correctly to give the exact effect I wanted... CnC, seriously demanded.
I've been making sigs of this same style for a while now, the thing is that it's so easy to do, but sometimes we get horrible mistakes like these presented here. Oh, I also kinda learned how to do borders. V1 V2 CnC?
The old times. I sure as heck wasn't around back then, but just imagine if everyone from the past would come back... the site would probably implode and would be removed from the internetz forever.
I would say you've improved, but in time I believe that you'll continue to do so. Try to make use of more elaborated narrative, and remember to use simile and metaphor to your advantage in order to keep improving. Keep it up.
Oh, yeah. Well, it's just the basics. I'll check again to see.
When you first showed me this...I was extremely surprised. You manage to entangle us in a vision of beauty and love, that represents purity and passion. And we think everything is perfect with the world between this couple. Then you send us to the climax, and we hope our suspicions aren't true, so we keep on fervently reading. There it happens. We begin to see the devastating consequences of love that goes beyond. I was literally open-jawed at the end. You manage to captivate us into this narrative and string us along in lavish serenity, only to drop us back into reality... That, my friend, is amazing And, while this is sappy, in a way. It's still so great, and baffling. The only mistake I did pay attention to, was the missing comma at the start of the last paragraph.
I believe that since this is a diary, the slang is actually permitted. The same thing goes with first person writing. I'm sure that no one likes to read it(unless used in a perfected manner), but I'm pretty sure it can stay. As for making this neater, yes, please do. It's not very understandable like that.
1. This website 2. Disney Shows 3. Mainstream music 4. Demi Lovato 5. wearing anything that hides my identity (don't even ask) Here we all 'despise' Disney...yeah, right
Man, I'm glad and sad at the same time. I'm happy that you're doing well in real life; that's great. I hope you still come around and talk once in a while, remember that we are your friends and that we'll miss you a lot from time to time. You are an awesome person, and I hope to meet you in real life sometime. Suerte <3
It's sad that you have to leave, but hopefully we'll get to talk on MSN or something. It's disappointing that you leave on bad terms with the people on staff too, but it's your decision in the end. I wish you the best of luck, and success in your life. That dog pic is so nice
It's nice to see new members posting, and that is good, but I must critique your story. First of all, it feels a bit choppy, and sometimes the reader doesn't truly get a feel for it. It seems you've got the basics down, just remember to add the emotion into your narrative. Also, the font is a little too big, so please try and change the size a bit?
Xaale, I'm so sorry I couldn't do more to help you, because it seems impossible, but don't lose faith. It will all pass. You've got to try and be strong, try and hold on. I know it's not easy, but...you have to try. If you give up now on everything, you may not talk to your friends again. We'll all be waiting for when you come back, because, damn you better be back or well find some crazy-ass way to contact you. Remember that you're not alone, and that we are your friends. Good luck with everything.
Both a perfect 10, due to the content. Crazy Pyro, I can't help but laugh watching that Avi.
Sig: 5/10 Avi: 6/10
