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Well, poems, hand-made letters. Or maybe something symbolic between the two of you. It's all depending on the person. Just bring her something she'll like (thought she may like anything you bring her, 'cause i'd be from you.)

Well, you could first go to the movies, or anywhere fun for that matter, just to lighten the mood and be happy, ect.

Afterwards, you can take a slower pace, like the park you mentioned. Also girls like small, sweet details, that show them you care for, and think of them. It may be nice to consider this.

But overall, do what feels right, don't do something that may make you feel uncomfortable, and be yourself. I'm sure everything will go fine.

You really need to work on your spelling & grammar. There's so many mistakes, like the misspelling of 'Satan', and the "you're" 's ect.

I do understand that you wanted something long, awesome, but divide it. It tedious to read such a long piece and not know where the stanzas end. I do commend you for it being lengthy...

but this particular piece is just a dragged on repetition, like a chanting, but even if it was, it's still not done correctly. the words light and night and fight and sight plague this piece and it seems like you've run out of vocabulary, and it just made me want to skip chunks of it.

I enjoyed the end, it seemed the only thing different from the whole poem, but that still doesn't change the fact that the poem seems cluttered and somewhat overloaded with the same words. Well, just keep going at it, you seem good, but still needing to work on some things.

Or..."It's my money and I can do whatever the heck I want with it."

works too, you know. xD

Each time, it feels like your writing becomes more...human? I don't know if that's a good thing, or not. I'm liking everything so far, but this chapter felt sort of meaningless to read, except for the last few paragraphs.

Now, I'm expectant to see what comes next. I want to know how she's going to do in this new path. Can't wait

Well, that's true too, but they also look like re-paints of girafarig, and there's another pokemon that is gear-like...I can't be bothered to learn the names of so many re,re,re-hashes. And of course who can forget the rat and the bird? It's a signature thing, but at least this one isn't as gag-inducing as bidoof's face was.

Well, I remember you're the girl with flowing red hair and gorgeous eyes. I don't think we talk much, but I do remember that much.

xD

Sara!???!!!!11!11one *implodes*

Wow, that was...unexpected.

But, I agree with you on some things. I do want this game though...I'm excited for the sprites, and it's been a while since I've played pokemon, but this got me excited like a child xD.

btw, is that woman the new professor? Because by the looks of it, she seems to be. As for the new gen pokemon...after so much milking, do you think there's going to be much originality?

Zoroa, and evolution look like Lucario and...well, we're pretty much getting the same pokemons with different sprites, but they move now!!! so we're instantly hooked to buy exact re-incarnations of the same thing. Oh well, I'm still getting it.

Wow, I won? I actually thought Kairi9hearts9 would blow me away, but I actually won.

Well, I don't know if I'll partake in this month, but good luck to everyone, and may the best poet win.

Even though you went for the distorted thing with her, it still doesn't save the fact that you need a clear focal point, there's really a bit of confusion regarding where to look in this thing.

the green makes me think of algae, actually, though...I think the tag itself needs a clearer focal, and a bit of work with the colors. I think it has great depth.

If it is a poem, you should definitely post it in the poetry and lyrics area, and if you have a poetry thread, even better.

Afterwards, you can open a discussion in the other section, by posting the same poem, yet adding the question. This ensures you're getting it in the right section, but at the same time getting a discussion out of it.

Overall, if you have a poetry thread made, or want to start one, best if you first post it in the CC, and then discuss it.

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Dalk made something nice!? And almost sweet? I can't even...

Lulz, jokes aside, I loved this piece, and it was great to read. I like how you managed this whole concept. I was moved with the last snippet of dialogue. It was a bit bittersweet, but strangely seemed to tie things up well. I'm impressed by you, and well....

<3

I really like this, though it's pretty simple, I think it serves its purpose and that's what makes it good.

I think photomanip isn't adding new stuff to the picture, but using what it already has to enhance it? That's what I think Misty means...I think another text would fit better, but that's just me.

It's a beautiful song. I love most of her songs

It's not an unthought mess, though. I did think of how to make it flow and fit. It's all messy, because I wanted it like that, somewhat. I think of it as an amalgam. A beautiful amalgam. Thanks for the input, though. I do want to know what people think of it.

You need a professional. This thing you are going through can't possibly be good for your health. We can't help you find the solution to this, because we are merely a website, this requires more than us.

The way you describe it, it could be that you have an infection...though I could be totally off. Maybe it's stress, that is beginning to affect you physically. I can't be certain of that. What I can be certain of is that you need to see a doctor. Then you can be sure of what you're truly going through.

Oh, Well. After you logged off, I began working on it. Remember how I was saying that I wanted to do large art? Well, I pulled it off yesterday. I'm glad you like.

Shades!!!! You're back. I missed you so much!!!! We need to talk more often.