Okay what ever you say. Also just so you know I know it's hard to do this, but try to keep a least four lines for a paragraph or more since it is...
That's crazy and unbelievable. O_O
Hicupping and coughing he tried to regain his composure thinking of the dancer that had vanished and trying to be strong, but he couldn't help but keep crying from the magnitude of pain that he was feeling. "I know... I know... But it hurts so much... Can you at least make the pain go away or I'm not going to be able to do anything to help us get our goal," he struggled to say biting his lower lip as he felt he was being choked, and trying to remain strong in front of him. Cloud got on his feet and shouted at Xemnas. "What are you doing? Put him down. You could be making his injury worse. He doesn't need to worry about getting hearts for you right now. He needs to heal and will be out of commission for quite some time. He needs to recover. I know what I'm talking about."
I disagree. It was a powerful punch from her.
Uh yeah. That would be painful especially to guys I would imagine. I'm being realistic here. No one would just be fine after that. It's going to...
"You don't understand Larxene. The boss said that if I won I would show him hope and now I only failed him. Besides he wanted to talk to you and then you said you would something about you betraying him?" He coughed almost choking on the water.
We'll just have to wait and see, but right now Demyx is being hysterical cause he is in some serious pain.
Demyx shivered like a child, a lost alone young one who needed the comfort of others. True he didn't have a heart, but he could feel pain as he rolled on the ground screaming in agony. "Axel?" He moaned after the flurry was struck across the face. Laying on his side, he looked up at Xemnas who was showing phantom rage. "He didn't deserve that. If that was meant for anyone it should have been for Larxene since she is the one that struck me where it hurts. And thanks to her I'm not going to be any use at all." He whined, his cries of pure terror and blindly pain ringing through the exterior of the castle and into the interior so all the members of the organization would hear. Cloud rubbed his back knowing his pain was getting worse. "Oh man he needs medical attention I bet," he looked at the others. The ice form Leon's water bottle had already melted and he couldn't just leave Demyx sobbing hysterically on the ground like that. The poor guy would need therapy after this. He doubted he would never be the same. Cloud did his best to keep him calm, keeping him from getting up for he was afraid he might hurt himself more.
It works I suppose. Xemnas wouldn't just let the chaos ring through though.
Xemnas will have to take charge as being the one in command and remind everyone that he's the boss. It's called ruling with having fake fear from...
Hmm... Xemnas would be alarmed or shocked as I would think that he would react in a way that would be fitting. For example if he were to get hit...
Good luck with that.
Well Larxene hit Demyx in the sensitive area for all guys. And Axel is reacting from that since Demyx is in a lot of pain at the moment. Cloud and...
Demyx couldn't take it anymore. He had to get away from her. He had to find some place where she wouldn't find him and try to hurt him again. Damn his cockiness. He was only attempting to prove himself before the boss letting her know that he was higher in rank than her and then she retailates letting him have it in the jewels. Gagging, his stomach retched nothing coming up except for some blood. Whimpering and shivering he couldn't face having Roxas see him in the condition he was in. What would he think of him now? Nothing but a whiny baby not fit to be in the organization. Thinking quickly he pulled his hood over his head to hide his identity and quietly sobbed into his gloved hands. Cloud saw the glance from the one who resembled his own hairstyle and looked away. He had heard him, but was attending to Axel now speaking to him requesting that he leave Larxene alone and looked like he was going to break up a fight. Cloud didn't care though. His priority was set on Demyx and helping him. Even if he was a member of the notrouriou organization, Demyx had gone out of his way to help him, defend him aganist the likes of her and now was suffereing for it. He needed to be away from this whole group of violent animals. He did not derserve what had happened to him.
In a desperate attempt Demyx tried to strike Larxene with his sitar while she was being dealt with by Axel, but that turned out to be futile for his nerves were sending to many impulses to his brain signaling he was out of commission and could not attack without aggravating the injury. Dropping his weapon on the ground, he wobbled over falling on his side as he leaned ready to throw up."Damn her! She better not get away with this," he was huddled in a feeble ball and was hunched over crying in his hands for the intensity was not leaving him alone. He sniffed and acted like a child to be expected of an injury of that caliber. Cloud nodded. "That may be the case Leon, but you would think he would help him unless he is not choosing to which I don't understand?" He turned his neck to the left to eye Roxas out of the corner of his eye. "I bet it is just shock though." He kneeled before Demyx rubbing his back and doing his best to keep him calm. "Poor guy. He needs to get away from the likes of her. And she is going to pay Leon. Mark my words she will pay for what she did."
Cloud stopped at the traffic stop and called for his friend to come over. "Hop on and I'll tell ya." He waited for Leon to get on his motorcycle with him. He made sure the light was still red for he wasn't going to take off until it turned green and if it did the other cars would have to wait until Leon got on safely. Demyx did the dip, moving his feet now and he was enthralled with the beat of the music. He spotted Axel dancing with him and soon it became a contest of who could dance the quickest and with the most moves. Their fun was cut short when the music died. "What? The song wasn't even over?" He looked around noticing that the store was closing. "Oh no wonder," he laughed.
Your attention is required for War of Nobodies please?
"Great. I just hope the boss doesn't show up because I'm really enjoying the break from him." He got up from his seat and stretched his arms out.
He walked into the family room and lay on the ground since he was to big for the couch. Then a thought came to him. Thinking quickly, he decreased his size where he was big as a horse and was able to get on the couch that way.
"Good." The engine finally starrted and they were soon on their way down the road. "Now where is the nearest gas station? Does anyone have a map?"